Reviews for Thunder
blueeyes31 chapter 2 . 1/7/2010
must say didn't see that punishment coming, I can't wait to see how those drives home work out.
Evermore001 chapter 2 . 1/7/2010
aww i'm really likeing this story
Cullenfan524 chapter 2 . 1/7/2010
This seems like it will be good! I also seems like it will be sad and might possibly have a sad ending. But I look foward to the journey.
cherrygirl1 chapter 2 . 1/7/2010
yay for an update! I do hope the whole story stays in Edward's pov b/c I feel like most stories are ALWAYS Bella's and this particular one I feel is better suited to his :)

Can't wait to see what's next!
TwilightSVU chapter 2 . 1/7/2010
Can't wait to read more, can you keep it in Edward's view point
kmfroggi chapter 2 . 1/7/2010
i was waiting for emmett to pummel him, but i guess he was respecting esme and being an adualt about the situations. his punishment should be interesting! lol
Draco's Favorite Girl chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
Yes, definitely!
Cullenfan524 chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
Yeah this was good...you should definetly continue!
lion-and-the-lamb-648 chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Great first chapter!
Kyuketsuki In Oki chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
I definitely think you should continue this story - it's a unique plot, something that is lacking among fanfic sites.

However . . . who is your beta? Cuz, honestly, you NEED someone to check over your grammar before you post another chapter.
iN L0VE WiTH VAMPiRES chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
please continue(:
kimbella chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
yeah keep going :)
2009sparklefan101 chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
i think its good but i want to know if bella will walk?
rougekat chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Please continue. I love your stories and would absoloutly love to see wha you do with this one.

Please continue writing.
SandKastles chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
of course you continue! You WILL be DEAD if you dont! ;) jk but yes, continue.

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