|Reviews for The Chaos Theory|
| Souseiki chapter 32 . 7/16/2013
Ahh, the pretty comment connection was so subtle and brilliant! With how M. Sasuke's thoughts paralleled, contrasted, or whatever the proper word is with past Sasuke admitting it outloud. I think once the epilogues are finished, I'll have to reread this twice in one sitting. You're great. Your story's great. Everything is great.
| Souseiki chapter 39 . 7/16/2013
I was wondering which foreshadowing one of the other reviewers were talking about. I feel like my heart was ripped out a bit. And I literally choked on my own spit from reading the end of the italics. This fic is fantastic beyond words. I shall continue on with my leapfrog reading around random chapters and reviewing when I feel like asdfghjkl;
| Cascade00 chapter 44 . 7/16/2013
Nooooooooooooo! Hinata do something and stop Sasuke!
| AlienAgainstTheWorld chapter 44 . 7/16/2013
Very interesting. I was beginning to fear for a while there, but I see that the story is back on track, and with a few interesting hairpin turns, too. Bravo.
| kiss2lips chapter 44 . 7/16/2013
Fvvvvvccckkkkk itttttt! Oh my gahd why?! Ahhhhhhhhh! The suspense! :0
| Souseiki chapter 15 . 7/16/2013
"He wasn't as miserable as she was, but supposed his life was significantly less important."
When I read that part, I literally just curled into my bed and made an array of pained expressions. That was really, really cruel. The new summary fits this interconnection between chapters and timelines. However, I do miss the "if you die, I die" tagline. Incidentally in the same paragraph as the line I quoted.
I also liked the mention of Sasuke's self-destructive tendancies. Does that make his choice in the latest/last chapter more or less than what it is? As in is that him falling back into past vulnerabilities due to the emotional changes he's had (as in, not watching the same degree of struggle in Hinata a year after the rape) or is that him coming full circle in regards to him knowing/appreciating the value of life and so on? I like how in later chapters it mentioned he gained appreciation of life while watching M. Hinata and knowing of her ordeals. So, it's like M. Sasuke's choice is either influenced by the emotional alterations he made indirectly made to his past self or his own timeline experience overall. Or a little bit of both.
I feel like I will nearly throw something if it ends similarly to your SasuHina Vampire fic though. I'm still unsure if it would be in joy or sorrow. Regardless, I am beyond excited and appreciative of this story, especially while leapfrog rereading it.
| Souseiki chapter 29 . 7/16/2013
Skipping around random chapters for quick rereads. Oh gosh, I totally missed the chakra sharing in this chapter the first time around. It's a good comparison; from their inconsistent practices to the seemingly natural use of it while in the past. The reaction and reply to Younger Sasuke's question in the latest chapter about the chakra absorbing technique makes more sense now lol. I knew they did it liberally, just now how it became such an inside joke with Naruto and Sakura as well.
| Guest chapter 44 . 7/16/2013
Gah I hate cliffhangers! Update soon PLEASE!
| imorin chapter 44 . 7/16/2013
Throw me a life jacket, I'm drowning in my tears!
Seriously only you can turn me into this huge emotional mess... Darn I knew Sasukes death was imminent, but man, that still hurts to read.
And so we've reached the end... I dunno what to say, my heart is heavy. You're a very talented writer, I thank you for the incredible ride and for sharing your story with us. I was sucked into this wonderful world of yours and never wanted to leave, each chapter building my need for more! I will continue to follow you and read whatever you write cause I know it will be nothing short of pure awesomeness!
I cannot wait for the epilogues! Till then. :)
| zsaryn chapter 44 . 7/16/2013
NOOOOO! Don't let Sasuke die!
| ginsbabymomma chapter 44 . 7/15/2013
| yusav chapter 44 . 7/15/2013
What! No! Please...
Why did he have to take his life, when he himself said that sasuke' presence cannot be
questioned... My heart and my brain hurts... Update more? Hha thank you.
| Guest chapter 44 . 7/15/2013
OMG, what?! No...
| kiyone110 chapter 44 . 7/15/2013
I saw the forshadowing to Sasuke's demise but man this doesn't make it any easier. I know there's 2 epilogue's left but im a little sad to see this story end. It was a great ride I love your take on Sasuke and Hinata. I'm wondering what Sasuke told Hinata before meeting the man in white. However, why Hinata's father an not Sasuke's? Also now that Naruto has to give up on being Hokage what does the future hold for him? I look forward to the last 2 chapters.
| Hinafan16 chapter 44 . 7/15/2013
Oh my goodness. Oh goodness. I never saw this coming. Every time I read a chapter I'm screaming at my computer lol I am so looking forward to seeing what happens next!