Reviews for The Chaos Theory
lmaooooooo chapter 4 . 2/23
MOE IM LAUGHING MY BUTT OFF! I can imagine Naruto bumping into stuff while trying to get to the table
manILoveyou chapter 4 . 2/23
man i love that small part with teenage Hinata and future Sasuke. I also love how Kasai likes Hinata, i think thats so adorable. I just love this story man
shalei chapter 4 . 2/23
my body is ready! 3 3 3
College n Curls chapter 4 . 2/23
I really want to know how this turns out! I'm so excited!
hime-23 chapter 4 . 2/23
Ouve algumas mudanças no desenvolvimento da história mas sigo muito empolgada para ver mas .
Espero que a ligação entre sasuke e Hinata permaneça forte como era .
Obrigado pela ótima fanfic
sumire.syrup chapter 4 . 2/23
I really love the contrast you noted between the mirai team 7 hinata and their counterparts. it's almost uncanny. I really enjoy the way you write mirai Hinata and Sasuke...

What confused me a bit is that Sakura had her baby taken away, can she still be impregnated in the future? Its been awhile since I read the original TcT and I don't recall Sakura and Naruto ever having kids in the future, or maybe they did but I dont remember. Not sure if you can disclose this since its a spoiler and its your story... anyways great chapter. have a great day!
endingsarenotalwaysbad chapter 4 . 2/23
I honestly don't remember every detail from the chapters but I think that you changed a couple of things here! And I loved it. I'm not the biggest fan of Sakura's character in general and I think her stubborn, kind of rather selfish side showed her perfectly fine... I'm just so sorry for Naruto because he's a sweetheart and deserves better...

As for the young Hinata's development... There really are worlds between the stammering 15 years old and the older Hinata... And I really, really like how you write and describe in Sasuke's perspective. These tiny little comments and remarks about the changes in the future... I really like that narrative technique.

So yeah, can't wait for the next chapters :D
Schizoid7Loner chapter 4 . 2/23
I love the change! It feels a bit more straight forward and you really get a chance to see more interactions. Props for making Sasuke marginally more affectionate and emotional!
Guest chapter 4 . 2/22
This rewrite is excellent, it's sucking me in all over again. Thanks for doing this for your loyal readers!
omg chapter 3 . 2/22
I love this so much
la bella nunez chapter 3 . 2/22
im kind of sad that all the other chapters were deleted. I really want to read this story again but i guess ill have to wait. This is still one of my all time favorite stories and i hope the next chapters are updated soon so i can read the rest
loveyou chapter 3 . 2/20
THIS STORY IS SO GOOD WTF , I hope this story will continue, i am really impressed so far!
Guest chapter 2 . 2/20
It made me so happy when I saw you posted!
endingsarenotalwaysbad chapter 3 . 2/21
I almost forgot how good this story and its plot was! Seriously, I like how all falls into place and that you really try to keep the characters in character :D You do an excellent job with Sasuke and I like how you turned shy Hinata!

Can't wait for the next chapter.
Juri.DP chapter 3 . 2/20
BIG MOOD! I'm so nervous because you might be changing some plot points, and the younger versions of the group concern me. As I remember, Sasuke was a determined little nugget, trying to get answers and all. Future Naruto was also a little frightening here and there.

Auuuuuuuuugh! I can't wait! Mess me up! Mess me all the way up!
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