|Reviews for The Chaos Theory|
| Akki-Alex chapter 46 . 8/22/2013
I seriously cannot express how amazing this story is! :D even though I didn't some parts of the chapters xD I would take sometime to carefully get the meanings but just wow I love this story. I liked the semi suspense I love it when it gave me goosebumps on things I would usually catch on xP although I have a feeling that the "man dress in white" was a loved one. anyways you are one a favy authors ill miss your writing greatly and I wish you the best of luck! :3
| sandamini chapter 46 . 8/21/2013
Uwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaah! I'm sorry but I don't get the ending. I loved this Sasuke and you just knocked him out like that! :( I cried at the ending, can't you please make an alternate ending or at least tell us what Hinata did.
Other than that, I think this was an awesome fanfic and I loved it so very much. I liked the way you plotted the story, the humor and the language techniques you used. I found very little faults in your grammar and the story was appealing and addictive.
| KiraiKenji-mehrab chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
WHAT THE! this has been here all along and i never saw it!
this is sooooooo coooooollll! i can't wait to read more of it
| strawberry chizoey chapter 46 . 8/18/2013
I'm actually crying I can't believe it's over this was a amazing story I miss Sasuke this story put me through a lot of emotional things I simply love this story THE BEST STORY I EVER READ :'-)
| CrystalBud chapter 5 . 8/17/2013
:D this is great
| CrystalBud chapter 3 . 8/17/2013
damn, this is suspenseful, I love it!
| CrystalBud chapter 2 . 8/17/2013
lol, this is awesome :D
| reddressed chapter 46 . 8/16/2013
Oh Gosh, I actually had to cry a little. It's so sad, that Sasuke died.
I loved this fanfiction so much - one of my few favorites. And this story was so confusing sometimes, but you did really well. I had fun reading this.
Thank you so much that you wrote this masterpiece! 3
| RenjiRulez5986 chapter 46 . 8/16/2013
I really loved every bit of your fic but I do have to say that the ending was a total MIND-FUCK!
Still, I lobed this story through and through!
Well done! *applause*
But seriously, the ending was a major mindfuck...
| Saki-Hime chapter 46 . 8/16/2013
Aww so sad and so good at the same time. Can't believe it's over. This is the best story I have ever read. It was AWESOME, loved it. Can't wait to see what else you come up with.
| Saki-Hime chapter 45 . 8/16/2013
Awww, yay they finally conceived Kasai even if it wasn't the way they may have planned it.
| Valana chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
| LM22102 chapter 38 . 8/16/2013
(As written on a touchscreen phone-disclaiming plausible typos)
As you know, I had waited for TCT to finish completely before re-embarking on this incredible journey. I have been reading a few chapters each night before I sleep, and am usually just nearly passing out. And so I apologize for only reviewing thus far. As such, in concluding chapter 38 in which Interlude 12 was written and revelations (which were actually spoiled through your author's note in the beginning, just BTW) revealed, I have this to say:
SON OF A FUCKING BITCH.
Sorry, sorry for the profanity but despite the AN spoil, the confirmation of it is just, HOLY FLYING FUCKS, that bitch was with them this whole effing time! I just, I can't handle right now. I'm going to continue tomorrow night, or I don't know, Oh my, my weekend is so busy.. do I finish reading tonight (impossible, takes me hours to get through a few chapters..) and pull an all-nighter, sacrificing much needed sleep for the upcoming weekend, or chance finishing this on Monday night.. OMG WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME. THIS IS SO EFFING AWESOME IN SUCH EPIC PROPORTIONS, I DON'T UNDERSTAND WHY ANYONE WOULD FLAME YOU REGARDING THIS STORY.
I'm so tired, physically, emotionally, this story has wrung me out MAN. I've waited for SO LONG to read this. I'm glad though, still. It's a good kind of pain, one like the sores of accomplishments. The interlude is a good place for me to stop for now, until I can get my bearings and have enough time to read this. Because when I start reading the final chapters .. I want to relish in tge tragedy that's yet to come.. kukuku!
Also, having read your profile and seeing that you're getting flack for the ending is such bullshit, please. I 100% support you and I haven't even read the ending. Why? It's a writer's fucking OBLIGATION to give that to their characters (assuming it's that kind of story, excluding crack etc), regardless of the readers opinions, the story has been WRITTEN in practical STONE. Their lives (sometimes, depending on the author naturally) have been decided from the first conception. We, as readers, understand the frustration that an unpopular ending may entail. But as authors, writers of history, we, at points, have no control whatsoever once the characters have decided to pave their own destinies. (Excluding the authors and stories in which of course, is written in a purely controlled fashion. I'm not trying to offend anyone here, omg lol)
Anyway, just wanted to let you know. Enjoying this IMMENSELY thus far and have NO DOUBT (surely though, some tears in the future) about the satisfaction upon the conclusion of this fantastical journey. Let the flames feed the fires of your greatness, Authoress. (.. you ARE female, yes?)
| Raina KIM chapter 46 . 8/15/2013
;n; que paso despues no puede terminar asi !
| Askyuu chapter 46 . 8/14/2013
First of all let me say, I have been a fan of yours for years and years (since I first started reading fan fiction) though I don't think I've ever commented on one of your stories. I have a tendency to just lurk forever. You're one of my favorite authors and my favorite SasuHina author. I love everything you write. I'm sorry that people have been harassing you about this and I hope you do read this and know that I at least am glad that your writing exists and am thankful for anything you chose to throw out into the world.
I remember the first versions of this and 'A Light in Darkness'. They were and are among my favorites even now after all this time. I came back to the fandom somewhat recently to find many stories gone forever and some different than I remember. While I was sad that you were taking your down I was glad it was for revision and not just to delete. I'm really glad I stuck along for the ride.
While it was hard for me to read this as you were updating because I'm the kind of person that reads the end of a book before the beginning I enjoyed it all anyway. I've always wanted to read a great time travel SasuHina and this is just perfect. I actually didn't find it as confusing as you had claimed it would be but maybe it's because I read it over and over and always make sure to read you Author's Notes.
All in all this, is an excellent story and though I'm sad to see it end I'm happy to be here to see it finally finished. It's quite bittersweet with this last epilogue but I'm gonna let my imagination take me where it will. I'll be lurking around 'The Hyuuga Curse' now to see where you lead us next.
Thank you for this amazing work!