Reviews for The Chaos Theory
Black Rose chapter 10 . 7/26/2012
What the hell? poor Hinata :(
hmfan24 chapter 17 . 7/26/2012
This story is epically told, you know. Although it has a lot of angst and causes me stress, I'm enjoying it quite a bit. xD

You're very good with suspense which is probably why I'm continuing reading it for the first time in a year or so.

But it's one of those stories where I want to avert my eyes, but I can't turn away, you know?

Gosh, the diction, the structure, the characterization - I hope I can write like this someday.

Also, I'm surprised Neji hasn't really made an appearance.
Black Rose chapter 5 . 7/25/2012
Someone is jealous! :)
Black Rose chapter 5 . 7/25/2012
ooh cute! :3
CiNdYwEb chapter 26 . 7/23/2012
Wow. This is an absolutely amazing story! It's well written, has shocking surprises, and it has all I like to read in a story! Fantastic job:)
Black Rose chapter 3 . 7/23/2012
This is good! I like it a lot!
Skyflake Roses chapter 26 . 7/22/2012
LOL, the ending. Wow. I hope Hinata regains her badassery :/
valbino chapter 26 . 7/22/2012
so instead of sensory training hinata mastered the gentle fist. interesting.

kasai is a troll omfg I love her

and jesus christ the ending asdhgskfjsfj

God I love this fic

I guess my only gripe would be that sometimes you use "orb" instead of "eye", but that doesn't detract from my enjoyment remotely!

Always looking forward to more!

-Val
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
I really love this story it is really well written and has a lot of twists and turns you don't expect. I think you did a good job with this story I love the characters and how you really did work on character development really well. and i hope you update soon! :D
lilkyonkyon chapter 26 . 7/21/2012
This story is so intricate and amazing. I love how everything's intertwined, and how the future keeps shifting. Great job! I can't wait to see how the future keeps changing!
Guest chapter 26 . 7/21/2012
OMG! CLIFFIE! NOOOOO!

I LOLED SO HARD AT THE LAST SCENE!

PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! OMG!

I hope hope Hinata becomes badass again though and that they get their Kasai back somehow!
GoldKing chapter 26 . 7/19/2012
The ending was amazing. UPDATE SOON!
GoldKing chapter 25 . 7/19/2012
I love this story.
Guest chapter 26 . 7/19/2012
ok my mom is right there but i can barely handle the laughter. Ahh your fanfic sure makes me feel a lot better after math learning hour. Thank you!
Guest chapter 26 . 7/18/2012
THIS CHAPTER WAS AMAZING! THE LAST PART WAS HILARIUS... I LOVE IT! PLEASE UPDATE IT SOON.
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