|Reviews for The Chaos Theory|
| valbino chapter 26 . 7/22/2012
so instead of sensory training hinata mastered the gentle fist. interesting.
kasai is a troll omfg I love her
and jesus christ the ending asdhgskfjsfj
God I love this fic
I guess my only gripe would be that sometimes you use "orb" instead of "eye", but that doesn't detract from my enjoyment remotely!
Always looking forward to more!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
I really love this story it is really well written and has a lot of twists and turns you don't expect. I think you did a good job with this story I love the characters and how you really did work on character development really well. and i hope you update soon! :D
| lilkyonkyon chapter 26 . 7/21/2012
This story is so intricate and amazing. I love how everything's intertwined, and how the future keeps shifting. Great job! I can't wait to see how the future keeps changing!
| Guest chapter 26 . 7/21/2012
OMG! CLIFFIE! NOOOOO!
I LOLED SO HARD AT THE LAST SCENE!
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! OMG!
I hope hope Hinata becomes badass again though and that they get their Kasai back somehow!
| GoldKing chapter 26 . 7/19/2012
The ending was amazing. UPDATE SOON!
| GoldKing chapter 25 . 7/19/2012
I love this story.
| Guest chapter 26 . 7/19/2012
ok my mom is right there but i can barely handle the laughter. Ahh your fanfic sure makes me feel a lot better after math learning hour. Thank you!
| Guest chapter 26 . 7/18/2012
THIS CHAPTER WAS AMAZING! THE LAST PART WAS HILARIUS... I LOVE IT! PLEASE UPDATE IT SOON.
| FallenRaindrops chapter 26 . 7/18/2012
YES! THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT WE NEDED!
| SarahiNia chapter 26 . 7/17/2012
Your good! I effn love this story!
| oCloudNine chapter 26 . 7/17/2012
Hahahaa things just got more interesting
| shnickers chapter 26 . 7/16/2012
Trauma doesn't begin to describe the sight of your future counterparts having sex, I'm sure.
It's interesting... Hinata and Kasai seem to change the most frequently as a result of the changes in their pasts, but what about Sasuke? I'm curious to see what pivotal moment would cause changes in his personality...
What happens now that Hinata and Sasuke know their future? Will it result in the current-aged Kasai or will it delay their get-together?
And what's going on in the past?
| shnickers chapter 25 . 7/16/2012
I must have missed this chapter!
Things are moving along... So. Of course, first of all I want to comment on Ino! The short two or three paragraphs she appeared in made me question whether or not you have completely singled out one bad guy. This sentence (a really awesome one, by the way) in particular gives me pause: "...the inception of her [Ino's] ambitions blossoming in her eyes." Are you hinting that Ino might want some of the Byakugan for herself? Hm...
Preteen Kasai is hilarious. I look forward to seeing more how she interacts with Hinata, given that she was mostly sparring (playing? haha) with her daddy this chapter. Her power also makes me wonder whether about the extent of her role in this story-somehow I am starting to think her existence and abilities play a very large part in why the world "ended."
Hanabi seems to have gotten over her strange jealousy/dislike of Hinata (perhaps due to the tragedy) but I look forward to seeing how they clash! I forgot to mention this a while back, but I liked how you depicted Hinata as flighty and shallow (in Hanabi's eyes) in regards to her relationship with Sasuke. It lends an interesting angle to Hinata-in-love that hasn't been done yet, and gives me pause in the regular assumptions people make about Hinata and Hanabi.
One more thing: your tendency to state the obvious (and understate it!) continues to lend a degree of humor that keeps me coming back for more, regardless of how long I've been out of the Naruto-verse.
| keke1208 chapter 26 . 7/16/2012
omg so happy for the chap!
| cafunes chapter 26 . 7/16/2012
I was literally SCREAMING WHEN I didn't see another chapter to read after this one ahahaha. But thanks for this wonderful chapter! I'm glad you updated this I hope everything is going well for you with your busy life and all!