Reviews for The Witfit Challenge
KimiD chapter 2 . 7/29/2011
Great story~ I loved every word and the idea was totally awesome and original, nicely done!
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 13 . 1/24/2010
Jazz is definitely right!

Woman up Alice and show your to him. But come on.. we're talking about Jake here, hot, rugged & handsome.. Who can think straight...;)

Catch u on the next one...
Babette12 chapter 13 . 1/18/2010
Ha ha! Woman up. That's the first time I've read that line! I love it.

I think it's funny how we refer to dealing with our insecurities as being high schoolish. The truth is, insecurities will always exist. If they don't then it means we aren't aware of our own shortcomings and are probably insufferably arrogant. LOL!

I'm glad Jasper told her to go for it. I wonder what she'll do. I'm also quite curious about what Billy is going to say about the box. Does Jake have it?

Great job! You are definitely getting better. Do yourself a favor and go read the first chapter, and then this one. I think you'll be pleased with how you've grown.

Rochelle Allison chapter 13 . 1/18/2010
while it's still sometimes weird for me to see alice and jazz interact but not as a couple, i do like the slow burn you've created between alice and jacob...
Babette12 chapter 12 . 1/18/2010
Can I tell you that I think your use of current events is perfect? Especially the way you tied it into canon? Simply wonderful. It brought tears to my eyes. In college I had neighbors who were from Haiti, and while I know they still live in the states, I fear for their families. Thanks for a brilliant way to spark people to help out.

Rochelle Allison chapter 12 . 1/17/2010
no,i thought it was lovely of you do do this. what happened in haiti is one of the saddest things i've ever witnessed...
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 12 . 1/17/2010
I didn't it offensive at all. It was worked in quite fine.

Makes you wish a bit of fantasy was reality, that's all.

Not bad at all, thanks for it..
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 11 . 1/16/2010
Nice chap! and cool introduction Edward and Jasper in this..

It's really good that Alice has a friend like Jazz.

where you're taking me with this, I'm not sure but looking forward to more..
Babette12 chapter 11 . 1/16/2010
LOL! *hugs you back*

I speak nothing but the truth! And when I say you are doing great, you are. In fact, I normally don't read non-canon couplings, especially when Edward and Jasper are a couple, but yours doesn't bother me at all. (I'm kind of OCD like that)

I seriously laughed when Rose walked out in that little kimono. Poor Emmett probably didn't know what hit him, which is most likely exactly what Rose wanted. Sometimes it's fun to torture the poor boys. I actually did that once to a friend of mine. His jaw hit the floor, since I'm usually a very conservative dresser. It was fun.

I'm looking forward to Jasper's and Alice's 'couple's massage' and the ensuing talk. That will be fun!

Keep up the good work! You're doing great!
Rochelle Allison chapter 10 . 1/15/2010
aw, how sweet! i like the little side romances going on, too.

also, wine and chocolate? um, please and thank you!
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 10 . 1/15/2010
Oh! What a date.. That was so romantic..Brownie points to Emmett for that one..

So good!

Thanks for this...

Have a good one..
Babette12 chapter 10 . 1/15/2010
I did go all out the first time I made my hubs dinner, long before we were married. Everything was set perfectly, and I had prepared a wonderful roast, mashed potatoes, some vegetable and a salad. I knew he liked Jello, so I made that too. Only, I forgot to add all the water. *facepalm* We still laugh about that, over twenty-two years later.

This was so great. I loved your descriptions. They made things so easy to visualize.

Have you considered joining the fictionista workshop? Google them. I'm going to be a moderator, and they are taking applications for writers, editors, volunteers and more. You can apply through the 31st. The goal is to make us all better writers/reviewers and maybe even help those who are interested in getting published. We'd love to have you!
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 9 . 1/14/2010
Wow! quite the discovery there Alice..

And as for your AN, yeah I find it pretty amusing too..:)
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 8 . 1/14/2010
Woah! what a surprise there for Jake...

Really liking this..
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 7 . 1/14/2010
I felt a bit sorry for him but I'm hoping it'll work for the best for him...
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