Heck of a start

I enjoyed your story very much. The love between the characters feels real. Thank you

I loved this story so fucking much ! Great ! Soooooooo great !

That was intense!

I love that they are connectingI hope this is the start to a great relationship!

I love that they are opening up to each other!

Omg, this story. I laughed, out loud, I cried. I ranted and raged. That is the mark of a good writer, you elicit emotions. Thank you!

So happy for the uncles, love them. Great chapter. Lots of changes from the beginning.

I adore those uncles! Love how they handled a bad situation.

You are so right! When only one partner works in a relationship , they don't last.
Bella doesn't want to bother people so she hides and gets in trouble.

Yeah, I can't imagine having the man you love in naked scenes with a woman.

Glad Alice saw the light. Great holiday.

I don't like the new contract, too stifling. Course Bella is so contrary and Edward is moody and ill tempered.

Oh my goodness!
Nice celebration, glad the new place is going well. Loved this chapter.

Loved Dana. Loved the bathroom scene, go Bella! The car was a hoot.