I'm glad I kept going, I'm liking the character growth

Thank you for proving me wrong in this chapter and bringing Edward back down to earth, I was happily surprised

Wouldn't let me review on the last chapter, so I'm leaving it here, since you specifically asked for us to "tell us how much we hate you." I don't hate you, but I do not like most of the characters in this story and I find their emotions very un-authentic. I think Edward is a cruel man that does not understand real emotions. For him to fly off and abandon bella out if anger, when all she has done was try to give her best friend time to gain the courage to tell her husband of her anxiety herself, is horrible. I know she is likely going to be punished in this chapter, but if so I hope Edward suffers for it, because he broke a rule as well, for them to never go to bed upset without talking. What he did, ignoring her, is so much worse. I'll finish reading this story because I want to see how it is, and don't get me wrong, some of it is totally hot, but I can't get behind any of your characters except bella, and I just feel bad for her most of the time because I feel like Edward is abusing her mentally. He wants her to talk about everything, but can't listen to anything of importance calmly, or talk about his own issues without flying off the wall. Sorry, hope that wasn't too harsh

I can see I'm going to like this story. I may not review every chapter. But I will review often. I have the sequel on alert also.

This was a beautiful chapter. Also sexy.

Wow. I wonder if Edward is a Dominant?

I am going to love this story.

'Yes it did hurt'
How many times has he promised he will NEVER hurt her? Yet he does - repeatedly. When is he going to be punished, for breaking his promises?

I don't think Bella should be wearing any collar right now lol she can't even follow simple directions or even come out and tell Edward things. How is this relationship to work when she can't even respect Edward as her Dom. There is a difference between being stubborn and just being disrespectful. She is just not ready yet and with her easily following Alice, one can only take so many spankings

Hi! this is great but isn't it a little bit like "Fifty shades of Grey"? Srry no offense at all.

No aftercare after a punishlent like this? Bravo!

Really? He gag her AND she can't safe word. THAT is a big non no

Wtf? 2nd time he use a cane on her for punishment when it's on her yellow list! Really?

This is all over the place. So jumbled.

One word, " Brilliant' loved your story and the family, thankyou for writing xx