Reviews for Fictionista Wrkshp January 2010 WitFit Prompts
Just Me Alone chapter 15 . 8/27/2012
Wow, what a revelation he has...though I am stupid and still don't understand why she let Mike have sex with her or why Edward cared.
Just Me Alone chapter 6 . 8/27/2012
This is amazing!
Just Me Alone chapter 5 . 8/27/2012
Me heart breaks for her...
Just Me Alone chapter 4 . 8/27/2012
Love this!
Just Me Alone chapter 3 . 8/27/2012
That is some kind of sweet, he came to check on her.
Just Me Alone chapter 2 . 8/27/2012
Wow, he doesn't even know she is there...
Just Me Alone chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
I am so happy that they are working things out, AND that she is making him wait.
BeachRosey chapter 10 . 8/20/2011
He's not a dick. He tried to be there for Bella, and it wasn't his fault she liked him more than he did her. I do find it creepy that he was so into his brother's girlfriend. As far as Bella watching him with Tanya, a little strange but, well, he's hot so maybe I would have watched too :)
Siriusmunchkin chapter 80 . 3/23/2011
Both know it's a really bad idea to get involved. Neither wants to stop. Edward's crossing a very dangerous line having more than a professional relationship with his charge. Bella's presence alone puts his family in danger if she's discovered. Not the first time professional lines have been crossed and won't be the last.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 79 . 3/23/2011
Bella is trying to ignore him for her own sake. And Edward is possibly being a jerk. Don't know that for sure. But betting the redhead he and Emmett were sitting with is Tanya and she made some comment about Edward being able to make all the 'little girls' do whatever he asked.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 78 . 3/23/2011
Ah, teenage crush's can be cute. And funny. Like when Edward is trying to find out if Bella really likes him or is just crushing because he's a boy. He teases and gets the information he wants, then runs. And Bella hasn't figured which way is up quite yet.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 77 . 3/23/2011
Bella is finally starting to dry out. Hopefully she'll be able to keep from putting drugs back in her system. She is all kinds of confused. About why she did what she did. Why she ever let Edward go in the first place. And that she wants to be in his life now even though she doesn't believe she either deserves it or that he would want her now. She hurt him very badly. She really needs to own that before they can even think about starting again. And it does look like that is on Edward's mind.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 76 . 3/23/2011
Somehow I knew that was going to happen. You could see Edward so wanting to be near Bella ever since he met her in Chicago. And there is absolutely no doubt Bella more than wanted to get into Edward's space. Like Esme and Emmett. Wonder if we'll meet any of the other usual suspects. Would be fun if Bella ends up working for Esme at the B&B.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 75 . 3/23/2011
Back together again. Got the feeling Edward was talking about what they will be telling their children when the questions start about how they met and fell in love. Don't think Bella is going to regret falling in love with Edward.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 74 . 3/23/2011
Hmmmn. This could be the start of something very interesting. And something they are both willing to try. :)
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