Reviews for Peter Parker's Last Battle Agaist Love
GGMK chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
Their love could never be.

Is...this the next Twilight?
RadReader chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
I know this is a troll fic, but this broke me. It's not the most explicit or the one with the worst grammar, but... It somehow broke me. I love you, Nix. COME BACK!
SpidyxOcto chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
This was a beautifully written story that touched my heart and left me and my friends in tears, please continue to produce this lovely work.

PS. I would love to see a love story like this with Two-Face and Mr. Freeze.
Liam chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
It didn't make much sense to me, I don't know why spiderman and doctor octopus were making out, and that part with the sharing of saliva mde me gag
WitchbladeHell chapter 1 . 1/5/2010

Interesting story, I alwasy love the concept of love developing between enemies. It's true when they say the line is very thin between hate and love.

I would just like to comment, if I may: you should slow down when you write these a bit. It's easy to understand when english isn't someone's first language or they might have difficulty grasping the lesser known areas of grammar.

But if someone takes the time to just read over they're stories as they're spell-checking, or whatever, then mistakes like "her freed himself" can be easily avoided.

Anyway, thanks for sharing, hope you write lots more!