Reviews for Taken For Granted
TashaRose chapter 3 . 9/10/2013
{beams} This was an interesting plot idea to play with ... Gorn and not Jareth being the Goblin King.
FarGreenCountrySwiftSunrise chapter 3 . 2/20/2013
This was wonderful. Thanks for writing this!
Sarah Rose 29 chapter 3 . 3/13/2012
What a neat little awesome story!

Two castles, the worms comment taking on a whole new meaning. I laughed at that.
Ice Demon Ranger chapter 3 . 6/27/2011
Cute story!
Tarocchi chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
the way you portray the goblins in this story is hilariously endearing: impish and playful, but not exactly the brightest crayons in the box (though i think they may have known what they were doing when they were "helping" jareth by telling gorn everything that happened). oh and the goblin's misplaced enthusiasm about blowing a hole in his house made me laugh so hard. :) i love it!

your idea for jareth not actually being the goblin king is peer comic genius. :)
Tsuki Doriimaa chapter 3 . 3/16/2010
::laughs grinning:: I like Gorn! _ Excellent story hun, I loved it all!
WillowDarling chapter 3 . 3/1/2010
That was a very clever idea, 'the castle beyond the goblin city' very very clever indeed
WillowDarling chapter 2 . 3/1/2010
Lol didnt Gorn say his last plan wouldnt fail? He amueses me. Hes like the perfect uncle character or something XD
WillowDarling chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
oh what a lovely idea. Jareth the Lord of the Labyrinth and another being the Goblin King. I like the idea. So far its going really well XD i love Gorn's character. Hes super cool and mischievous lol
I'Like'Cheetos chapter 3 . 1/11/2010
Yeah... This is no doubt. the best chapter, lol ;D Hmm... That kiss was lovely and so was the tension. It took him long enough! *teehee* such a wonderful ending, The goblin king is such a round character and is perfect for Sarah, and vise versa! You have played them two out extremely well. And Gorn is just lovely! He was probably my most favorite character of all. The love he has for his friend and the will and want to put all of his efforts on his plans. He was so cool! :D

Well done, darling! I do quite like happy endings.

I.L.C
PhantomsAngel1988 chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
loved it!
WolvesKey chapter 2 . 1/10/2010
Good job! Has some funny sides to it too, update soon :D
WolvesKey chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Good job! It has some funny parts to it as well :)
lonely 27 chapter 3 . 1/9/2010
the end?good job
S chapter 3 . 1/8/2010
The demba sounds...delicious. Decent story. Well-done.
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