Reviews for On a Battlefield in Ireland
captianOfships chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Ooo I liked that a lot! I loved the almost Drabbley(. not a word) style of it. It fit the story very well :) I also felt the abstract nature of the whole fic really set the scene and the mood, and made me feel what they were feeling. Thank you I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Draconeedslovingtoo chapter 1 . 9/4/2010

And the way you wrote it was really cool
yyqh chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
Wow, this is fabulous! Really love it!

Love the way you put it, very neatly written, and very beautiful at the same time.

Pleas keep on writing, please! Really want to read more fics from you.
Icetina chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
Excellent story. I want more.
TMR54 chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
HinaLuvLuvChan chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
this was really cute! keep up the cool writing :)
mariahs.fantasy chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
i thought you wrote the sex scenes perfectly, and did a good job blending it with the story plot. you managed to be descriptive without going into too much detail. i don't mind long stories, but i admired it in this instance. keep honing your craft!
zerofangirl chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Wow, that was amazing. I loved the abstractness, it made everything more intense.
Himuro chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
It's very sweet and I love it. The abstract-ness is also done in a good way. :]
Someone chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
This was absolutely beautiful. I don't usually review the M-rated fic I read, but I just loved this one too much to resist!
FaeSolo chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Sweet and short- loved it :D.

gigglefaries101 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
i liked this and i liked the not full of deatel just to the point

cool well done

The Conspicuous Ninja chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Beautiful. You write very well. I loved this so much.

I liked the non-explicit sex scenes, it created more of an atmosphere and more mystery to the affair.

(Though saying that I don't particularly MIND reading explicit sex scenes. ;) )

Heehee... Anywho,


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The.Red.Terror chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
I loved it. Fantastic