Reviews for Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix II
daithi4377 chapter 2 . 7/15/2014
Hmm who is that female and what did you do with Ron. Hermoine agreeing to pranks and Ron wanting to exercise and get in shape to fight?
sneaky lunitic spy chapter 51 . 8/15/2012
This is interesting
00Agent7 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
why are the Dursleys cowering? I thought harry pretended it was a wrong number? and how did they not know when he said "Okay, I'll see you tomorrow at noon then, thanks, these Dursley's are terrible. Bye". Why is he still worried about being beaten if he knows martial arts and wandless magic?
00Agent7 chapter 2 . 4/13/2012
he watched a few martial arts classes and now he can do martial arts? he can do wandless transfiguration?
Cat eats fish grinns chapter 25 . 4/13/2011
Nice story!

Q: Is harry Just going to live as a phoenix until 1995?

and it sIr XXX, not sEr... just trying to be helpful :)

I have read a second chance at life, awesome story man! (or woman)

I hope you never stop writing this!... oh wait, you did ):


Also, the only other mistake i noticed, and it doesn't happen often, but you dod do it a few times, you add the last letter of a word to the start of the next...

eg: Me: I'm going to the XXX

You: I'm goin gto the XXX

Besides that, this story is perfect :) Good work!

C ya,

cat eats fish, grinns
drewbt63 chapter 10 . 1/13/2011

What make of car does harry have and how is it playing up

and what are beats and why would spell not make it flinch

you really need a bata

not a bad story really, keep it up
BYoshi1993 chapter 2 . 11/15/2010
Ill continue to read the story, but it seems a little scattered. I mean Hermione saying something along the lines of it would be cool to be able to beat Malfoy up seems a little OOC and immature. I will continue to read to see if the story improves.

-Michael D
Draeconin chapter 14 . 11/4/2010
I realize that this was probably one of your first fanfics, but Harry's abilities would have been much more believable if you had explained how he came by them - and watching a few martial arts classes doesn't even come close.
WhiteElfElder chapter 51 . 10/21/2010
Great story. When are Harry's girlfriend and soul brother going to return?
WhiteElfElder chapter 36 . 10/21/2010
What about the stuff that was worked out for Godric and Cleatris to be able to join him in his time?
total crap chapter 11 . 6/29/2010
thought this story was going to be good but you fucked it up, no offense or anything (sarcasm if you didnt notice)

tips for improvement: delete the story dumbass.
Kingdark chapter 51 . 12/18/2009
I don't think you should trouble yourself with explaining the details of High K'haril. I won't read it myself if it is just a dictionary.

I like what you've written so far so good job.

Harry isn't too powerful so that's good. But what about his soul brother? I had the impression that he had no intention of leavin them in the past? Maybe Harry will go back to the past as a different founder? It would be kind of ironic if he would be slytherin?
Blueberry Babe chapter 51 . 9/21/2009
this story is written well thanks for continuing with your writings. good job
Escape my reality chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
wait. is this like Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix . i mean the one you wrote?
Taeniaea chapter 51 . 1/24/2009
Great Story
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