Reviews for Onion Rings
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2014
LOLLOLOLOLOLOL
TrapEds chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
Hahaha, I did! I don't really understand the slurping part myself; I enjoy eating onion rings too but I've never slurped while eating them. But this was a fun read nonetheless.
BlushLover930 chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
I liked it a lot! so cute 3 XD
JuJu-chan the Vampire chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Moohaha! Loved it XD
Shinsi chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! ;D THAT WAZ SOOOOOO FUNNY! I also LOVED the part wen Paul punches Gary! ;D Ooooooo! And the part that Paul kissed Ash on his forehead! ! my boyfriend ALMOST did that!
CCSlovergoSXS14 chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Next please next chapter you should do paul and girl ash hehehe :)
Yoru no Nx chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
sooo ash wants paul to give him head?
mundaneboy chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
Aww 3

ash and gary are such old news...

ash and paul. now that's smexy
AUTHOR QUIT WRITING chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
omg I was so into the chapter I forgot the one part was only a flashback and I lolled when you put "His stomach doing flip flops" I don't know if that was on purpose or not but dont change it.

Loved reading it: que fangirl scream - Kyaaaah! x
Mug of Doodles chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
Now I have a hankerin fer onioness! lol

This was so disturbingly cute. I understood what Paul 'suffered' through...minus the onioness. ;D
AnimeWolfGurl115 chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
LOL this was so funny! Especially the ending I couldn't believe that I hadn't read this yet. Nice job on it XD
Mantinas chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
This was really good.
Shadow Kitsune67 chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
LMAO. This made be giggle. C8 Lovelove this couple. . .though I love Palletshipping too haha.
Mina-chii chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
...Wow.

I've never read yaoi before, but this was just GREAT!

And when I read the title, I started laughing for no apparent reason. XD

Just to recap, I love this story, I crave chicken, and onion rings shall rule the world. :)
This Be ALi chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Aha, random story. XDD Still love it. :D
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