|Reviews for Onion Rings|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2014
| TrapEds chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
Hahaha, I did! I don't really understand the slurping part myself; I enjoy eating onion rings too but I've never slurped while eating them. But this was a fun read nonetheless.
| BlushLover930 chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
I liked it a lot! so cute 3 XD
| JuJu-chan the Vampire chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Moohaha! Loved it XD
| Shinsi chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! ;D THAT WAZ SOOOOOO FUNNY! I also LOVED the part wen Paul punches Gary! ;D Ooooooo! And the part that Paul kissed Ash on his forehead! ! my boyfriend ALMOST did that!
| CCSlovergoSXS14 chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Next please next chapter you should do paul and girl ash hehehe :)
| Yoru no Nx chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
sooo ash wants paul to give him head?
| mundaneboy chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
ash and gary are such old news...
ash and paul. now that's smexy
| AUTHOR QUIT WRITING chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
omg I was so into the chapter I forgot the one part was only a flashback and I lolled when you put "His stomach doing flip flops" I don't know if that was on purpose or not but dont change it.
Loved reading it: que fangirl scream - Kyaaaah! x
| Mug of Doodles chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
Now I have a hankerin fer onioness! lol
This was so disturbingly cute. I understood what Paul 'suffered' through...minus the onioness. ;D
| AnimeWolfGurl115 chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
LOL this was so funny! Especially the ending I couldn't believe that I hadn't read this yet. Nice job on it XD
| Mantinas chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
This was really good.
| Shadow Kitsune67 chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
LMAO. This made be giggle. C8 Lovelove this couple. . .though I love Palletshipping too haha.
| Mina-chii chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
I've never read yaoi before, but this was just GREAT!
And when I read the title, I started laughing for no apparent reason. XD
Just to recap, I love this story, I crave chicken, and onion rings shall rule the world. :)
| This Be ALi chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Aha, random story. XDD Still love it. :D