|Reviews for First Impressions|
| mockingbird13 chapter 7 . 10/4
Wow, omigosh, yet another masterpiece. I just love how awesomely everything you write flows together. The way you set up the transitions between the past, Kajiki's origins, Iruka's youth, and the present is just masterful. And the levels of character development you just layer as the story progresses is nothing short of impressive. The lessons passed down from the various father to son relationships: Unagi and Kajiki, Kajiki and Iruka, and then Iruka and Naruto, even a brief flash of Sakumo and Kakashi. Love getting the level of thought you put into Iruka's parents and Kajiki's origins in the Mist. We get some insight into how Iruka's been influenced by his parents, and how he has aspects of Kajiki and Koeda as an older shinobi. Really great attention to character, plot and world development, just detail in general. Makes me wish the creators of Naruto had somehow hired you to write the actual canon, because the stuff you write is so good it makes me cry to think they missed the opportunity.
| Yorozuya chapter 5 . 7/20
sakjdhnalkd i'm actually crying HOW ARE YOU ABLE TO CRAFT SUCH A BEAUTIFUL CHARACTER AND MAKE ME FORGET HE'S DOOMED TO DIE
| Yorozuya chapter 3 . 7/20
Oh my... So the story for that wound comes out huh. It's really sad, to see Kajiki do that, but nice to see he at leasts owns up to his mistakes. And Iruka, a reason why he's such a nice person TT TT
| Yorozuya chapter 1 . 7/19
Oh my god, that is so CUTE, Iruka throwing the kunai at Kakashi's exposed head, and Kakashi's interpretation.
| Celestinasong chapter 1 . 4/8
| Sailor Pandabear chapter 7 . 12/16/2014
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/10/2014
Sorrow for clan forever lost.
A lost line prince, forgotten.
Choosing to hope for a better family .
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/10/2014
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/10/2014
Best fan story for the scar I've read.
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/10/2014
2nd chances: high on the list of why Konoha is the 'good ninja'.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2014
| narutonarutolove chapter 3 . 11/1/2014
| narutonarutolove chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
this was so cute...
| HopefullyNot chapter 7 . 8/26/2014
Niiiiice. Keep up the great work!
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/16/2014
The name fits him, though dolphins can be overrated. I love reading your stories. Why didn't I read this earlier? - Guest