Reviews for Safe At Last
QueenofAlices chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
Yay! I loved it! Too bad you didnt continue it. thank you soo much for writing this!

※Dance bubbles Dance!※

Alicia Chan
A reader of novels chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Hey, pretty good story you got here, though I've seen a whole lot of mistakes that you seem to make over and over again. One of the biggest ones is that you keep using the word 'than' instead of 'then', which you use when something is about to happen. 'Than' is a comparison word, like "He had more socks than his friend". Another thing you did often was use 'to' where 'too' was the correct term. 'To' is like in "I am going to do something", and 'too' is like "I would like to sit too." 'Too' basically means 'also'.

A couple others:

Threw; to have thrown something.

Through; to have moved within an object or place and exited it.

And lastly, you might want to capitalize your 'i's when you talk about yourself, it makes you look more intelligent.
The Pen Vs The Sword chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Sword: That was cute! And good!

Only one thing. There really wasn't much a description where Axel was. Was he a slave or what?
Midori Akita chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Mansex, no sexing! X3

Yay I helped! :3