Wow, I really like this! Everyone's in character, it's entertaining and it even has Homeschool in it! Actually, Homeschool is one thing that really impressed me with this; Most people take 'kind of a nerd' and make Homeschool very grounded in reality, with none of the cartoony quirks that really make the H*R characters. Your Homeschool is slightly creepy and yet still very funny, which makes him so much more belonging to their universe. I absolutely love it.

Also, that last line is hilarious. :D

LOL! the last sentance was hilarious. HAIL PAUNCHBERRY ICE CREAM!