Reviews for Overprotective
LaueeeCarter chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
I love the story. :) It's sweet and well written. Keep up the good work.
ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
Update immediately, please!
Guest chapter 21 . 2/15/2013
Good chapter!
Guest chapter 21 . 7/5/2012
this chapter was miss kelly,keep going you are doing a great job
classicmovielover chapter 21 . 6/6/2012
This is a really good story. Hope you'll update again soon.
classicmovielover chapter 7 . 6/6/2012
Aww such a sad chapter. Why did you kill off Clarissa?

"Normally I'm sure he would have made me keep it, but he was just to cold now that he couldn't help but accept my gesture." I think you mean so, not to.

" I turned to see Aunt Gwen approach me. Her hair was falling out of it's bun from underneath her hat." Its not it's.
mentos93 chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
pls update
Simply Ginger F.U.F.F.N chapter 21 . 2/23/2011
Adam's back but he's morphed into Spencer (no pun intended) and now Spencer is the one behaving? Interesting and I can't wait for an update.
mentos93 chapter 20 . 1/31/2011
Thank you for bringing Adam back to life. i loved this chapter it was great. pls update soon
Velociraptor256 chapter 20 . 1/26/2011
Very interesting cliffhanger there! This definitely isn't an awful chapter: you seem to have gotten into your stride with the quality of the writing.

It's only a little nitpick, but it might be good for the characters to at least make passing comments about the fact that Britain is now at war with Germany at this point (maybe Spencer being asked why he hasn't enlisted or something).
Simply Ginger F.U.F.F.N chapter 20 . 1/24/2011
Holy Crap! Adam's not dead? You have got to update now.

So sweet on Mer and Spence getting remarried and this time I hope Spence can keep his head out of his butt and not be the abuser he was to Mer in the past or you can unleash Mer's brother on him.

Adopting Sadie after Mer lost the pregnancy was great. So sweet. I look forward to another chapter.
phannie1973 chapter 20 . 1/23/2011
i am sooo shocked!

please please please

post next one

i loved it

but you know i would like a little more lowe

because i love him lol

thank you for posting
Simply Ginger F.U.F.F.N chapter 19 . 12/16/2010
I was thinking about this story not too long ago and about how I wish you'd finish it and I'm glad you updated again. Love this story and I'm patiently waiting on you to post more so I can see how Mer and Spencer end up. Good job.
Blairx6661 chapter 19 . 12/15/2010
"Why you kiss Mommy?"... i could marry this chapter just for that one line! xD

but seriously, this was great. and keeping in mind the author's note at the bottom explaining your personal problems, this was really really really great. and well-written as always :)

definitely looking forward to the next chapter :)

xxx
Jillianna'sOcean chapter 18 . 8/6/2010
Aww... Sorry to hear this story is coming to an end! Even though I haven't always reviewed, I've read every chapter and this is one of my favorite fanfics! It's really great, and I love the brother/sister relationship between Harold and Meridith. I can really relate to that... 3 I like how he's really protective of her, and I laughed when he asked "May I kill your husband?" That was too funny... :)

As much as I'm dreading the last chapter, please update soon!

Keep up the wonderful writing!

~Jillianna
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