Reviews for Jealousy
winterstale chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
"Gloomily, garroted, I caressed the empty cavern of my chest, always waiting for her to turn up again.

The ache spread like angina, sucking out my breaths.

I loved Bella. I’d take each moment of her grace no matter how pitifully horrendous the rent in my heart grew every time she departed.

... We fed off an unspoken implicit, gloriously equal manifestation of love

This was grace, without perfection.

...I understood haven and blessing.

And belonging.

And Heaven.

... “You are my home, my love.”

Thank you, Sweet-Tart. : )
weisyloveslemons chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Very unique and well written. A pleasure to read. I went through a few different emotions reading that story each one felt like a roller coaster ride and I enjoyed it.
Gasaway Alley chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
This IS grace and perfection.

Your glitzy glamor guides my garish gourd through your grim gutters, garroting your veins, gleaning and gleaming like a magnet drawing the gold from your blood. - Okay, just creeped myself out.

You used your big words again. You will earn yourself a kiss to the inside of your elbows for that.

This story grabs me by the rib cage, applying pressure enough to stop my breathing. I don't want to anyway. It hurts. I wheezed my way through this story hoping for the best, expecting the best and you delivered.

Happy New Year! ILY
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