Reviews for First Time Caller
n0 l0nger in use chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Oh god, I loved it. You definitely can write sweetie. I really hope your next story is a multichapter one.
KattCullen chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Please make this a full story; it's fantastic!
KarenAnn4 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Awesome one-shot! Very much loved that line "there she is"... I bought that hook, line, sinker! Thanks for such a great read!
Marianka chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Its sad u end here,lol.

Taht was so brillant i

love it u write so

Ginaaaa chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Aw, I really loved this, it was unique. I hope you continue it.
dazzledtina chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Ruben,” he answered with a thick Scottish brogue, “Ruben McCock.”

hahahaha, that cracked me up.

I saw your story over on the CWIA thread, you did a great job.
the world is mine chapter 1 . 1/2/2010


very well written very true the charaters and intersting

i hope u continue it

great for ur first story
Forks Mayor '94 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Oh my god. I'm an aspiring writer, and I hope to one day be able to write like you. That has to be one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. It fed my desire for romance, and never have I ever fallen so hard for an 'Edward' on this site. Thank you for making my day!
karyn78 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
i loved your story and i think it would be great as a story! it was just so romantic...
sheneghan chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
This was a great story, I am disappointed it is only a one shot :-(

I love your writing and will read Take the Ice for sure. I am from Chicago and we love our Hockey Players.
walker123 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
i'd really like to see this one-shot turned into a story coz it was brillant.
chiahead chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
That was the sweetest story!
lansingchick85 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Definitely needs to be turned into a story and not just a one shot!
Iput chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Please, continue this into a story... :) I love this.
justahungariangirl chapter 1 . 1/2/2010

There really is potential for this story. I loved every minute of it and I'd love it if you decided to continue it. I really can't wait for more, but if you decide against writing more, this still was a really good story.
462 | « Prev Page 1 .. 19 26 27 28 29 30 .. Last Next »