Reviews for First Time Caller
Bronzehairedfreak1901 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
That was brilliant! Haha! I love it! Fantastic job :)
Absolute-Southern-Insanity chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Awsome story. Defenitally (?) story potencial. Sorry crappy speller.
Simply Alex chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
This was great, very well written! Very interesting and original. I hope you do expand this into a story! Nicely done!
XxMiaZeBookwormxX chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
A series!

Give me a series!

dude c'mon this is TOO good not to turn into a series :D
Yongqi chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
so cute so sweet, so perfectly adorable
dcozart chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
I loved this story so much. I hope you will extend it, it sure will be great to read.
dianecp chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
this was really good i really want to know what happens now. you should totally expand this and make it a chapter fic, it could be a great story. hope you continue this
twisted.cucumber chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
This is really good! I was actually a bit unnerved by the first couple lines, but it's more sweet/romantic than just, you know, pure smut... You should totally extend this btw. :)
fidens chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Great start! More please!
ixzirose chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Well written. I'd like to see this one go further.
Mimozka chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
aw this was adorable! please continue it!
Hushi Taloa chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Aw. So sweet, so beautiful - and so fun! Thanks for writing.
icefang7 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
i love this! really awsome! thanks
Archerywoman chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
i aproved i aprove make it a sotry please please please i loved it and who ever doensnts just crazy it was fantastic keep going keep going. please.
corporsl chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
FABULOUS! YES,YES,YES - A THOUSAND TIMES YES! So well written and so much potential to build on - please do! I actually thought Alice was going to be the estranged sister, but whatever - it was wonderful that they discovered one another on their own. What a story to tell their grandkids, huh?
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