Reviews for First Time Caller
sheneghan chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
This was a great story, I am disappointed it is only a one shot :-(

I love your writing and will read Take the Ice for sure. I am from Chicago and we love our Hockey Players.
walker123 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
i'd really like to see this one-shot turned into a story coz it was brillant.
chiahead chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
That was the sweetest story!
lansingchick85 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Definitely needs to be turned into a story and not just a one shot!
Iput chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Please, continue this into a story... :) I love this.
justahungariangirl chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Hey!

There really is potential for this story. I loved every minute of it and I'd love it if you decided to continue it. I really can't wait for more, but if you decide against writing more, this still was a really good story.
Bronzehairedfreak1901 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
That was brilliant! Haha! I love it! Fantastic job :)
Absolute-Southern-Insanity chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Awsome story. Defenitally (?) story potencial. Sorry crappy speller.
Simply Alex chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
This was great, very well written! Very interesting and original. I hope you do expand this into a story! Nicely done!
User213456 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
A series!

Give me a series!

dude c'mon this is TOO good not to turn into a series :D
Yongqi chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
so cute so sweet, so perfectly adorable
dcozart chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
I loved this story so much. I hope you will extend it, it sure will be great to read.
dianecp chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
this was really good i really want to know what happens now. you should totally expand this and make it a chapter fic, it could be a great story. hope you continue this
twisted.cucumber chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
This is really good! I was actually a bit unnerved by the first couple lines, but it's more sweet/romantic than just, you know, pure smut... You should totally extend this btw. :)
fidens chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Great start! More please!
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