Hey, i just finished "his silent mind" and all i have to say is : it's beautiful...
at the beginning i had no idea what was going on, and you wondefully let me discover everything with the characters, i even cried near the end because i didn't know if the doctor would be able to save him...
Also your profiling of the characters was so... exact i just could envision the master going insane and the doctor so forgiving all the time... it must have increased his guilt so much...
The only thing i have to critizise on this story is the german christmas song "stille nacht" where you made faults in writng the lyrics ( it goes "Stille Nacht. Heilige Nacht. Alles schläft, einsam wacht nur das traute hochheilige Paar...") But i hold no grudge, german is a difficult language...
Else, this story was perfect... they should let you write the skripts for the episodes, maybe then it would get better...
Just another Fan

I started to read this series a long time ago and I still love this first part ! It really is an amazing job, with a great plot and so very IC :)

Stunned. Absolutely stunned. This was beautiful.

Okay...did I mention that this is brilliant?

This is brilliant...and freaky...and this doc definitely sounds like ten...and just wow...

I think you said this was ten, but the dialogue really puts me in mind of five. So that's how I'm picturing him. Cool thing about this character, huh? ;)

This is amazing.

Where, where do I even begin?

This, THIS is why they created , so that brilliant minds like you could create masterpieces like this.

This my friend, has to be one of THE BEST Fanfictions I have ever read. It made me laugh, cry, and constantly want the next chapter, NEVER was there a moment when I could take a break it was simply too beautiful for me to stop.

I congratulate you, I thank you, and I wish you well a 1000xs each. I'm left in awe.

This was utterly, let's go with a Doctor quote, BRILLIANT ! Totally sucked in by it ! I would repeat the word brilliant so many times, the box I am typing in would implode on itself…

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it was so depressing at first, and then so uplifting
this was amazing, SUCH a well-written piece
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(insert a colorful vocabulary of swear words hear)! This is FANTASTIC! ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY BRILLIANT! For Rassilon's sake! When I first read this, I did not understand what the hell was going on! I actually decided to stop reading, but the damned mysteries kept tugging at my brain! You are an excellent storyteller! You really kept me on my toes the whole journey!

And wow! What a revelation! I had two theories; either the Master and the Doctor were in a different timeline where the Doctor was nursing the Master into sanity, or there was some kind creature that took the Doctor's guise and used the Master's memories against him. Man, am I glad that I was horribly wrong on both fronts!

THEN YOU FRICKEN CONVINCED ME THAT THE MASTER WAS GOING TO DIE! You crushed my heart when the idiot/brilliant Doctor left the tower and boarded the space ship! DAMN IT! But of course, the Doctor; oh, that brilliant Doctor found a way! What a journey! Thank you for sharing your brilliant mind with us!

Beautiful.

That was... spectacular. Simply and positively, spectacular.

A very interesting story, I look forward to reading the rest of the series.

Cheeky bugger, that Doctor, isn't he? Hitchhiker's Guide indeed.

Anyway, definitely off to a good start. It'll be interesting to see where it goes.