|Reviews for The Hero and the Detective|
| Naoto-sama chapter 4 . 1/13/2010
Sorry for my late review again... I'm busy wih my school, so I don't have much time to open Fanfiction X(
Yes, you updated the next drabble! I love this drabble!
Think of it... If Souji found Naoto without towel with her... *evil smirk* XD
Naoto, don't shot him! X)
I think Naoto was like a thief sneaking in someone's house a
What if Nanako found her in her onii-chan's room? XD
Well, as always, I'm waiting for next drabble! XD *kicked*
| Joezette chapter 4 . 1/13/2010
this chapter is very funny XD
if Naoto don't have gun with her,what Souji will do? *perverted thinking*
Naoto: *points the gun at me*
Me: Whoa!hey Naoto-kun...relax!
Naoto: What are you thinking before?
Me: Uhh...Ohh...You and Souji per-...never mind...
Naoto: *shoots me*
Me: *sob* my head...anyway Update!
| Jennette Enduro chapter 4 . 1/10/2010
Now this was great and funny at the same time, I thought I was going to fall off my seat there for a minute. that was great. update soon I can't wait for the next instalment.
| Shina Suzuki chapter 4 . 1/10/2010
My God. XD Naoto is pretty scary yet cute, and sexy. *shot*
Naoto sounded like a thief o.O really, I'd like to see if Naoto is caught by Nanako. XD;;
Please update soon!
| Shina Suzuki chapter 3 . 1/9/2010
Sweet! XD So cute! I kind of scared when Naoto's reflection appeared in the water. Like, a ghost? O_o;
Love your drabbles, please update soon! w
| Naoto-sama chapter 3 . 1/9/2010
Sorry for my late review! XD *kicked by author*
Yayy! Thank you very much for this drabble! I like it! Mwahahaha *evil smirk to Kanji* XDD
Oh! Naoto went dating with Souji! Hehehe, an unusual characteristic of Naoto, but I DO really LIKE your storyline here! Good job! )
And I like Souji's statement:
“I hope she won't run away again like she did at the swimsuit competition.”
Lol, I really want to see Naoto in swimsuit XDD
Uhm... I have seen many pictures of Naoto wearing dress... She's so cute X3 *shot by Naoto*
Okay, I just want to say: UPDATE! XDD
And thanks for making this drabble :3
| Joezette chapter 2 . 1/5/2010
uhm..isn't Mamudoon effect is for all enemy?so,Yukiko,Kanji,and Souji must take the damage too
If one foe,the skill is Mudo or Mudoon
er...i'm sorry,my english is terribly sucks!i can't english language T_T
anyway keep update!
| Naoto-sama chapter 2 . 1/3/2010
Yay! You updated this story again! XD
Wow, there's no mistype again! I'm amazed for the second times! :)
You are really good at making romance story! I have to raise my thumbs for you d(o)b
You know, I like this kind of sweet drabbles :D
If you update the next drabble, can you make it with the jealousy of Kanji towards Souji? Because you know, in some events, Kanji showed his true feelings of Naoto
Pleasee... *puppy begging eyes mode: on* X3
Oh Naoto... You're so sweet, protecting Souji from Mamudoon... X3
But why Rise got angry when she heard Naoto called Souji with his name, not with 'senpai'? Are you JEALOUS, Rise-chan? *smirk* XD
Naoto That's why I always bring you in the dungeon that has enemies with darkness skill and enemies those weak to light and darkness X3 *kicked*
Again, keep writing and update! I'm waiting!
| Jennette Enduro chapter 2 . 1/3/2010
I haven't read any drabbles before but this is top-knotch
The paring is beyond exelent
no errors expect here and there but that's the way the characters talk so I don't count that
so all in all this is awesome keep posting
I'm looking forward to the next instalment of drabbles
| Naoto-sama chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
I'm not an author in , but I just looking for some great stories in here, so forgive me if I have some mistakes in my review :)
You're doing well in making story! I also love this pairing very much. Your words in this story perfectly expressing their love, and how Souji is caring Naoto. An I was very amazed that you don't have any mistype words in your story d(o)b
You said this story is based on the 8th rank of Fortune ? Well, I don't know very much because I never start it ;)
The last, keep writing! I'm waiting for the next chapter!