|Reviews for Demon Project|
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/6/2014
very unique write and really good!
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/4/2014
It's okay, rin can be their adopted daughter that was orphaned by the demons
| WolfGirl9802 chapter 10 . 2/12/2012
AHHH NO FLUFFY! :( thats okay it still really good! :)
| skycullen chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
Kagome's Caucasian face as she limped over to the chained up Caucasian boy.
may have over done that a bit try black haired boy or teenage boy
| Fire Inu Princess chapter 14 . 12/31/2010
this story was awesome, iwhsed the chapters were longer but hey, it still ruled otherwise, will there be a sequeal?
| Alice Rowen chapter 14 . 8/21/2010
I love the story
| angelstar2495 chapter 14 . 6/18/2010
i love this story! could you make a part 2?
| neon chesire cat chapter 14 . 4/12/2010
hi i gotta say i loved your story i love the way kagome found inuyasha and how inuyasha protected kagome you were also right when you said i didnt expect kagura that was a great touch but i kinda say sesshomaru and kagura gettin together but that made it that much better i love shippo 2. well now that i got that out of me i would like to thankyou for writing this story and to tell you that you are on my favourite author same for the story and i have subscribed to u so write some more great storys k
| lil baby chapter 4 . 4/8/2010
inuyasha is all dog not cat and dont change it into any part of a cat its stupid! but others wise its good
| xXxDarkestFairyxXx chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
Hey, piece of advice, your tenses keep changing sometimes; try to keep everything in the past tense: 'she had no clue on how to deal with ghosts since she *has* never learned that from her grandfather whom was the head priest of the temple which they lived at.' the 'has' should be a 'had', oh and it sounds better as 'who' not 'whom'.
And: 'and now sunset has fully come and she might not make..', rather make it as 'and now sunset had passed, she might not..'
Plus, start a new paragraph where it says 'Kagome Higurashi...'
btw awesome story, keep up with the writing :)
p.s. hey can I check your story as in, like, be a beta, and correct spelling, grammar etc mistakes and give u advice? I would find it really fun, so can I? and dnt worry I wont steal any of your ideas etc, lol. seriously.
P.P.S, please don't take offence! i'm not criticising or anything, honestly,I'm just giving corrections because I like to help and because your story is really good so far.
| InuYashaMegaGirl chapter 15 . 4/5/2010
| PMSingTeenager chapter 4 . 3/15/2010
um not to be mean or anything but you have one fact wrong inuyasha is a dog demon hence inu (inu means dog in case you didnt know) so yea for future referance other than that great story. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK JA-NE!
| Serandusk Othim D'Demon chapter 14 . 3/12/2010
Wow nice story and last 2 chapters :)
| Leo112 chapter 14 . 3/11/2010
yea! happy ending! good story! read ya later!
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/11/2010
YAY! I LOVED THE STORIE! I LOVE IT!