|Reviews for Demon Project|
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/21
the Caucasian face thing...it's like you're trying to make this into a race issue :/
1. It's unnecessary to point it out what race our characters are unless it adds to the story. Plus it hinders identification and projection. We read fanfiction and stories because we are invested in the characters, eh?
2. Inuyasha is a JAPANESE manga and anime series. The HIGURASHI's live on a SHINTO shrine site. It's hard to ignore that even if you read the English translation/watch the English dub. What are Caucasians doing there?
3. INUYASHA means DOG (犬) and FRIENDLY SPIRIT (夜叉)- if we're not true to character basics, why don't we just skip the Japanese names all together, ditch the shrine, youkai and miko stuff and just base this in NY 2020 as a story between two random highschoolers named Drew and Stew (no offense to Drews and Stews).
I really like this story and will probably read as much as I can, despite the urge to scream any time I see "Caucasian" or "cat". Either than that stuff, Deamon Project is a lovely stoy!
Since the story hasn't been updated, I'm mainly addressing this to fellow reviewers. Cheers
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/6/2014
very unique write and really good!
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/4/2014
It's okay, rin can be their adopted daughter that was orphaned by the demons
| WolfGirl9802 chapter 10 . 2/12/2012
AHHH NO FLUFFY! :( thats okay it still really good! :)
| skycullen chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
Kagome's Caucasian face as she limped over to the chained up Caucasian boy.
may have over done that a bit try black haired boy or teenage boy
| Fire Inu Princess chapter 14 . 12/31/2010
this story was awesome, iwhsed the chapters were longer but hey, it still ruled otherwise, will there be a sequeal?
| DarcyLowther chapter 14 . 8/21/2010
I love the story
| angelstar2495 chapter 14 . 6/18/2010
i love this story! could you make a part 2?
| neon chesire cat chapter 14 . 4/12/2010
hi i gotta say i loved your story i love the way kagome found inuyasha and how inuyasha protected kagome you were also right when you said i didnt expect kagura that was a great touch but i kinda say sesshomaru and kagura gettin together but that made it that much better i love shippo 2. well now that i got that out of me i would like to thankyou for writing this story and to tell you that you are on my favourite author same for the story and i have subscribed to u so write some more great storys k
| lil baby chapter 4 . 4/8/2010
inuyasha is all dog not cat and dont change it into any part of a cat its stupid! but others wise its good
| xXxDarkestFairyxXx chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
Hey, piece of advice, your tenses keep changing sometimes; try to keep everything in the past tense: 'she had no clue on how to deal with ghosts since she *has* never learned that from her grandfather whom was the head priest of the temple which they lived at.' the 'has' should be a 'had', oh and it sounds better as 'who' not 'whom'.
And: 'and now sunset has fully come and she might not make..', rather make it as 'and now sunset had passed, she might not..'
Plus, start a new paragraph where it says 'Kagome Higurashi...'
btw awesome story, keep up with the writing :)
p.s. hey can I check your story as in, like, be a beta, and correct spelling, grammar etc mistakes and give u advice? I would find it really fun, so can I? and dnt worry I wont steal any of your ideas etc, lol. seriously.
P.P.S, please don't take offence! i'm not criticising or anything, honestly,I'm just giving corrections because I like to help and because your story is really good so far.
| InuYashaMegaGirl chapter 15 . 4/5/2010
| PMSingTeenager chapter 4 . 3/15/2010
um not to be mean or anything but you have one fact wrong inuyasha is a dog demon hence inu (inu means dog in case you didnt know) so yea for future referance other than that great story. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK JA-NE!
| Serandusk Othim D'Demon chapter 14 . 3/12/2010
Wow nice story and last 2 chapters :)
| Leo112 chapter 14 . 3/11/2010
yea! happy ending! good story! read ya later!