kinda his fault he never asked anythinhg about his charge before he took the job, but being close to home is always a plus for most. Bella is a little trampy but what can you do. First chapter is good.

I love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & I’m happy that Bella & Edward are Married & I’m happy that Bella & Edward have a Beautiful daughter

Ugh again. You are such a talented writer. I feel the emotion to my core. So good! So sad!

This chapter needed the tissue warning. Crying like a baby over here

Just rediscovered this story after years of first reading it and I still love it!

Even though I got frustrated in some Chapters this was a beautiful story and I have enjoyed every word you have written.

Thank you for taking me on the Edward and Bella journey!

I have loved this story until the last two chapters. Why is it that Edward and Bella always have to breakup to get their HEA. They don’t!

You have a problem you talk, this is the cowards way out for both of them. Chapters like this make me want to stop reading. It could have gone differently!

Plus now I know Riley is working for Aro and James to get to Bella and Charlie. I thought this all along... but now I know Bella is really in danger not just from School but at home too, and all Charlie is worried about is keeping her safe but is has just put her in Mortal danger.

Absolutely fantastic made me cry lot but brilliant

I'm on chapter 25 my hearts breaking I hope she finds the letter

This definitely made me cry very impressed by your writing skills. I'll be looking into your other stories as soon as i finish reading this one️

Amazing story XD

He would have to be cleaned first I think.

Dude, your job is to guard the girl. Then the next thing you do after being hired is jog? On the place you're suppose to keep her in?

Nooooooo!
If you don’t write more I swear I’m personally going to find out where you live and make sure you rot in hell.
I’m not joking!
Earlier I never thought anything about soldiers. I thought their job was the worst. But right now I understand how important they are and how much they risk and sacrifice just to protect strangers they don’t even know.
And I have only you to thank for that.
Thank you and I wish you a happy long journey in you career of writing.
I hope you are in a career of writing.
Good luck!

I hate you!
I hate you so bad I could kill you if I knew where you lived. You just have to go and make us all cry and get heart breaks and all that stuff.
I think you’re a great writer if you can make people experience pain and cry like this. It’s like we can feel the emotion in your story. I think you’re very talented.
Now excuse me, I have to go cry myself to sleep and sob the next day.
Thanks anyway *I’m being sarcastic, don’t take that in a good way!*