Reviews for Code of Conduct
Judyblue95 chapter 12 . 6/7
He did the right thing by letting Renee back in. This one visit won't make up for what she allowed to happen, but it's a start.
Judyblue95 chapter 11 . 6/7
I'm so glad she finally told Charlie. I knew he would stand up for her!
Judyblue95 chapter 10 . 6/7
its a good thing i'm reading this as a finished work. i don't like being blackmailed to read by review solicitations. i always review every chapter i read, whether it's a wip or a finished story. that being said, i loved the chapter. her freaking out over him saying those 3 words to her is going to make her sit up and look at why she feels that way. hopefully she can love him back.
Judyblue95 chapter 9 . 6/7
I'm glad he confided in her too. Maybe it's best they wait to get further into physical involvement until she turns 18. I wouldn't want him charged with statutory rape...
Judyblue95 chapter 8 . 6/5
she's changing. good.
Judyblue95 chapter 7 . 6/5
not yet...I imagine that it's difficult for Edward, feeling so drawn toward his charge, to maintain professional distance. He's failing miserably at it and who can blame him? Well..besides Charlie.
Judyblue95 chapter 6 . 6/5
You write this well. All the characters have multiple dimensions and are not predictable and have flaws. Even those I don't like, Tanya and Rosalie, are well drawn. My heart hurts for Edward.
Judyblue95 chapter 5 . 6/5
these 2 just might be good for each other. charlie won't like it...
Judyblue95 chapter 4 . 6/4
last chapter for tonight. he likes her. she likes him. they are both in trouble. at least have him wait until she turns 18, ok?
Judyblue95 chapter 3 . 6/4
Jake is an ass, isn't he? I have a feeling Edward could do him some damage if he tried...
Judyblue95 chapter 2 . 6/4
what was Charlie thinking, hiring a 21 y/o gorgeous man to guard Bella? Didn't he realize that hormones would be a factor? LOL!
Judyblue95 chapter 1 . 6/4
Hi there. I have this story next on my TBR list as it was rec'd by someone I trust, thought don't remember who. My list is long. I see I've not read one of yours before so I'm looking forward to more. The premise in interesting enough for me to keep reading. I'll try to comment every chapter, I usually do, but sometimes miss some. Edward is going to have his hands full with her, isn't he? Looking forward to the journey!
LolaTheSa chapter 1 . 4/13
I hope Edward isn't gonna be some celibate hard ass in this one while bella is the free girl...
Guest chapter 43 . 3/13
I just wanna say : ' wow '
Annazonie chapter 4 . 3/9
Enjoying your story. A little surprised Bell hadn't mentioned that phone call from her mom to Charlie or Edward... Hmmmm
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