Reviews for Untouched
Tasogare no Raikou chapter 2 . 4/10/2012
Yummy xxx I love the drama and crazy Roxas, which isn't something I had expected. Axel is super cute, I loved the memories they had together - Rox biting his ear to see a reaction? Tee-hee... Very strange, I wonder what the people he's offing have to do with the family they've lost. Is he killing randomly or were they somehow involved. Or is the whole world the enemy now... xxx Will read more later! 3 :x:Myou:x:
Minami hirano chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
heyy.. so... was reading it.. and i really really like it.. Roxas is a charmer.. when he isnt.. uhmm.. killing people? bahah but i dont really get it.. sorry i know you have a few of "i dont get it"s but does Roxas have like a dual personality? this is interesting.. great writing(:
Guest chapter 3 . 2/5/2011
This is starting to remind me of Black Swan...

... Which is AWESOME.

Esp. the part where Roxas strangles Namine then realizes he imagined the whole thing.

Can't wait for more!
Vegx chapter 3 . 2/4/2011
I love the way you describe Roxas personality, I guess he is a phycopath or something, for as far I can see he doesnt feel any guitl when killing someone Im really loving this, is they type of story I enjoy reading, I wonder if Roxas and Axel affair is gonna be alittle creepy, I wonder If axel will ever know about Roxas assasin personality.

Hope you update soon,

srry for the spelling mistakes XD
Toxinator chapter 3 . 2/3/2011
Once again, great chapter. Love the storyyyy! Cant wait for more! This are so exciting. And you are a wonderful author! Love your writing style.
Toxinator chapter 2 . 2/3/2011
Interesting. :O

I liked it as much as I liked the first part. Keep at it!
Toxinator chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
I must say, this is a very original story, and Ive only read the first part! I love it so far, Ill have another review at the end, for sure! :D
TheMostPatheticNameEver chapter 2 . 3/30/2010
Well, I like it, even though it's really confusing. I don't get why Roxas acts like he does, or what exactly happens between him and Axel. Neither do I get what the "accident" you mention in the text is. Seriously, just update! I want to find out what's going on!

... Wait, it's a plot, isn't it? You want us to be confused to keep on reading!
psalmofsummer chapter 2 . 3/25/2010
Roxas is such a cute homicidal psychopath 3
blood as soft as silk chapter 2 . 2/17/2010
oh wow. This is so interesting so far. I cannot wait to read more. Thanks. D
CloudxDancer chapter 2 . 2/13/2010
Woah. Love how dark this one is, and you really make Roxas being crazy seem realistic. Definite hit.
AllSheNeedsIsLove chapter 2 . 2/12/2010
Oh me, oh my.
Pseudonym Jareth chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
This is really good.. Besides the fact that I seriously do not get in some areas.

The writing is impeccable, but you could start writing with the commas, like in books.

“It’s more the lightening and the thunder.” She admitted quietly.

Turned to

“It’s more the lightening and the thunder,” she admitted quietly.

But that's all. The writing, it's good.

You might wanna figure out some kinks, maybe parts you left out, because you really need to determine who died, and all that.

Look forward to this soon,

Jareth
blood as soft as silk chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Always a major hit. I like this story. It's sad and dark -my style -wink- ;D - Lol Thanks for the story so far. Can't wait to read more!~
Bstar94 chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
this was realy descriptive and well written o.o so many questions! keep up the great work !
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