|Reviews for My Step into Adulthood|
| RowenaR chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
I love this one because it shows what I would have loved to see after My Finale (I really, really do love that scene with Book of Love) and I love the homliness of this one. Thank you for sharing!
| KTxx chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Aww! Loved it:)
| xxx.EperdumentAmoureuse.xxx chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
Aww, this story is so sweet. :)
| imgoingtocrash chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
I loved this :) I also REALLY love MSEL so write soon! You write the good JD/Elliot FF's I like. :D
| Bells of Tomorrow chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
This was a really sweet read; exactly what I was jonesing for. I never thought of when exactly JD would have asked Elliot to marry him, but it makes sense that he would have done so after officially leaving Sacred Heart. His way of thinking that all of the good things that have happened to him so far were impulsive rather than planned was not only true, but made a lot of sense. It struck me as very in character that he would then carry that realization over into asking Elliot to marry him.
I really liked the way you incorporated bits from the show into this as well; like the same fatal flaw reference and the nod to that point of no return. Honestly though, I think my favorite line in this whole thing was this one here: "Maybe they were always meant to be, but they were just too damn immature to be." I think that sums up the course of JD and Elliot's relationship over the past eight years perfectly.
Of course, there were other very amusing lines I enjoyed in this as well. JD's line about his moment with Dr. Cox - (Which. Was. Awesome.) - really made me smile, and this line here gave me a good laugh too. "But he’s a doctor now and the last time he went back home, one of those jocks who pushed him around served him a McChicken Sandwich." Ha ha ha, I can definitely see JD silently basking in that moment.
Anyway, good job here. I really enjoyed the read. :)
| I'm a friggin Pokemon master chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Aw. :) This was awesome. I never really thought about the aftermath of his final day at Sacred Heart. And I'm glad you did this after the real final day, and not the season 8 version of it. :/ This was really good. It would make a good chaptered story if you ever think about it.
And don't worry... I get story ideas in the shower all the time. haha.
| Alice.1993 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
You already know I love this.
Oh and by the way, you nailed cute and sappy. But NOT CHEESY. :D :P