|Reviews for Warriors Of The Skies|
| arianabeavers12 chapter 2 . 12/12/2014
I like that you let Trudy live she is my favorite character on the movie
| Caiticatx chapter 14 . 11/9/2014
This is AMAZING! Please please please please please x infinity and 99.9986764 update !
| Takata chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Trudy is my favorite character and I love the fact you thought of a storyline that doesn't kill her off! It rocks! Are you planning to finish it, I really hope you are because I'm looking forward to seeing how it ends.
| Yessian chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
The story is good, but your writing style is like pulling teeth. (It's a good thing to do, but it's painful at the same time.) May I suggest the use of synonyms and words other than "pain" (it has appeared over a hundred and twenty-four times in just three to four chapters) and stronger verbs other than "was" and "was going, began to" and others that make the story-flow weak. Also, stronger dialogue. I enjoyed the concept, though.
| SEAL-TEAM6 chapter 8 . 5/9/2010
that was awsome!
| Camoss chapter 14 . 5/6/2010
Great job so far. I too was quite upset that Trudy died, and your story provides a viable and quality alternative. Keep up the great work
| The HongKonger chapter 14 . 4/28/2010
Nice update. Thanks a lot. Keep em coming
| Pink Lady Alex chapter 14 . 4/27/2010
I just read chapters 1 to 14; this is an awesome story! I really like the way that you've developed Trudy's character, and you've got very detailed descriptions of everything which makes reading so much more enjoyable. I can't wait to find out what will happen next! Thanks for all of the hard work that you put into this )
As a side note, I just wanted to say that I'm also writing a story with a female soldier who was believed to be killed in action, but actually survives. Just thought the similarity was neat.
| Shadow Countess chapter 13 . 4/16/2010
Once again, it was a lovely chapter and I really enjoyed it. The friendship between Trudy, Zoe and Zoe's followers is really sweet...sometimes human nature's really wonderful. Great job, and please do update soon! The Avatar...Trudy...fandom's really dying down
| fallenfaeangel chapter 13 . 4/14/2010
Loved the chapter and the story so far! I love how you have built the story and then presented another conflict. The nice thing is that the Conflict doesn't HAVE to be won by a bloody miracle and instead actually gives Trudy, Jake, and the gang a chance. I love Trudy and I hope to see more of her and see the new crew develop and the battle develop.
| The HongKonger chapter 13 . 4/6/2010
AWESOME! Lovin' this story.
| Green Raindrop chapter 12 . 3/5/2010
Ok, by far my favorite Trudy story yet! I can't wait to read more of it, you've really got me hooked. Nice job, nice job! -
| Codeless Enigma chapter 7 . 2/28/2010
I love the story, good writing. (try to keep run-on sentences down though)
| Xio Yven chapter 10 . 2/25/2010
This was a great story until chapter 10. Super powers? I'm really sad I can't read any more of this story, you've got an interesting writing style. It's been fun.
| The HongKonger chapter 12 . 2/20/2010
Yay. Zoe is a good person. Please update soon. I've noticed they've always killed Michelle Rodriguez off in nearly every movie. And I mean, every movie. The one exception is girl fight, IGPX and S.W.A.T