Reviews for Alternate Universe
touls.h chapter 51 . 4/9
Thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. Loved the humour throughout from the bond, the teasing between Mason and Eddie and Christian to riding the Russian! Well written!
credit18pd chapter 51 . 3/1
This is a well written piece of literature. Keep on writing.
kellymc88 chapter 51 . 11/3/2014
Omg your storys are great I've loved every one of the va ones I've read so far keep up the good work hope you do more on va :)
VAGypsy chapter 51 . 9/15/2014
Oh wow! What can I say...I absolutely loved this story! Each chapter was amazing and I could stop laughing at Mason and Rose's conversation about 'riding a, that is!' You are an amazing writer! I have read some of your other stories but this one had me caught up with the whole gang for the last few years! You brought each character to life with such depth without taking anything away from them. Each chapter was great lengths and I could see how much effort you have put into's an axing story to read and definitely one of my favs!
Thx for sharing your talent with us!
B4bidden.Products chapter 51 . 9/14/2014
Loved this story so much cant wait to read ur other ones. Keep up the great writing
Awesomeness339 chapter 24 . 9/9/2014
But 12am is midnight
But other wise it great
"Well done" from New Zealand
Jen chapter 9 . 8/16/2014
Lol i love this chapter! Hell i love this whole story so far its REALLY good! Ur writjng and stories r awesome! Thank u and keep it up! Big fan!
Nightmistrss chapter 51 . 5/31/2014
First thing I want to say is; thank you for making the bond two way. I haven't read a lot of fix for this fandpom yet but nearly the whole time I was reading the series for the second time I kept coming to the conclusion that spo many of the stories complications could have been prevented if the bind was two way. (I still don't get why the bond is the way it is, if the sport user is the one that reaches out to bring them back why isn't it that they are conveyed the mind of the one they saved?)
Anyway, I really enjoyed this
babyvfan chapter 3 . 5/21/2014
Oh dear friggering God. I feel so bad for her yet at the same time I'm so glad not to be her at the moment
wombaat24 chapter 51 . 5/17/2014
Wow. Your writing is fantastic.. Those final paragraphs you wrote we're extremely powerful. I thoroughly enjoyed this, not only because it was entertaining, but you grasped concepts and the themes that forge a compelling story.. Amazing :) thank you.
ellieloves2read chapter 51 . 5/9/2014
Thank you for making the changes for the Moroi Dhampir relationship. It always bothers me! I'm just glad there's a fanfic writer out there (meaning you), who took the issue and made it better ('',)
leahlilly215 chapter 51 . 5/2/2014
This story was amazing.
Guest chapter 38 . 4/25/2014
So many point of views...
mhutch23 chapter 34 . 4/22/2014
Fantastic story, been following you from the start... An ECG is to monitor heart rhythm, not a brain wave hehe.. Please don't take offence :) also I'm not one to skip ahead but I'm struggling not too with this much suspense haha
XxXLuna-HowlsXxX chapter 51 . 3/28/2014
Luved it.
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