|Reviews for Accidental Drabbles|
| Vendell13 chapter 4 . 3/9/2010
I'm loving JasMar. Good job and I hope you write more.
| rachelcullen77 chapter 4 . 3/9/2010
I love it. Its short, but it is...really perfect! I love it. I can't think what to say. Even in the smallest piece of writing, you manage to get across so much emotion, You are extraordinarily talented!
| SubtlePen chapter 4 . 3/9/2010
OOH! Yes! loved this!
| MaleficentKnits chapter 4 . 3/9/2010
I didn't even realize you were writing about Maria but I new it definitely was while reading... it speaks volumes...
| daisy3853 chapter 4 . 3/9/2010
oh, jasmar... teehee.
i love the struggle for power between them and how you've shown that – the way he feels all these emotions swirling around. i think that's exactly how it would have been, and even the style you've written it in adds to that.
"It is never sweet, as it should be with lovers, but bitter. It oozes jealousy, weaves together lust and anger, wraps me in a perception of power – hers and mine."
thank you for the jasmar, scm. :)
| bmango chapter 4 . 3/9/2010
I don't know why, but Jasmar is just wrong...like the whole situation is just wrong. I love that you used the prompt Bitter to describe the situation. Maybe that's what that bad taste in my mouth is... -b
| Legna989 chapter 4 . 3/9/2010
I'm just happy that Jasmar isn't your OTP. It is canon, however, and here you capture what I think their relationship was probably like: satisfying on some level, and not without purpose, but devoid of any real affection or companionship. This line is my favorite: "It oozes jealousy, weaves together lust and anger, wraps me in a perception of power – hers and mine."
Thank you for writing.
| LaViePastiche chapter 4 . 3/9/2010
omg hdu you post something without telling me.
you're LUCKY i already read this because i almost FLIPPED OUT.
i really, really liked this one, even though it was bb with grocey-face. i think it's very true to how they would be and it's like the biggest bummer sex ever. GOD.
| Chicklette chapter 4 . 3/9/2010
I have no JasMar issues. I'm kind of excited to see where you'll take the pairing... Shh...don't tell LVP.
| naelany chapter 4 . 3/9/2010
| daisy3853 chapter 3 . 1/28/2010
ooh mommy dork, i really love this.
to me the descriptions sort of read as simultaneously violent and maybe erotic. the first time i read it through, i was thinking of the bite and feed thing with an edge of *something*. but when i read this line:
"Because for which reward it longed, I didn’t know."
I went back and read it again, and I think it really ties the two different "thirsts" together nicely.
thank you, SCM!
| beignet chapter 3 . 1/20/2010
great especially after reading it's companion. Nice rewards from Maria. Wonder if Bella being brunette reminds Jasper more strongly of those days? LOVE IT!
| Starshinedown chapter 3 . 1/17/2010
Oh, I like this.
A nice peak into Jasper. Imagine that. You, Jasper, and a good tale.
| ckcpurple chapter 3 . 1/17/2010
Wow. That's an insight to Edward I didn't expect. Really wish I was near my books. Will have to keep this in the back of my mind until I have a chance to re-read that section.
I really wish Stephenie write the entire series over again from Edward's POV. (sigh) Pipe dream, I know, still...so glad I have all of you wonderful fanfic writers to do it for her!
Until the next installment...keep up the good work!
| ckcpurple chapter 2 . 1/17/2010
Oh! Really like this one. Had to read it over a couple of times to really get it. (Of course, it would have helped had I read the character name before just diving in!) Like the co-mingling of her visions as past memories given that her mind is blank.
Good job (as always)!