Reviews for Point of Separation
AvidReaderCoffeeDrinker chapter 1 . 12/15/2014
So sad! And that last line was the perfect touch- something so simple yet so impactful and really emphasizes that Mai's no longer there. Thanks for the mini story of one of my favourite couples, even if its not a happy one.
eternaltwilight chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
i know alot of people usually don't like the tragic fics

but this strikes a very deep cord in me

and in a way, i think everyone wants to have that chance with passed loved ones

so job well done on a short but bittersweet piece

keep writing

keep smiling
FallenRaindrops chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
NO! It can't be! T-T So close! He was so close! I really liked the last line. It had a nice finishing effect.
Lurkmoar chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
This was really touching and sad.. the lines were great.. I liked it! :)

Keep writing GH fics, please!
beautiful-surreal chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
So she died? That's sad. Very sad.

'There wasn't a cup of tea.'

I thought that was a very good line, because Mai always brought Naru his tea, and since the tea wasn't there, Mai wasn't.

It was really kind of short though. D'you think you could do another chapter?
CAUTION chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
*sigh* shakes head. Too short. Too confusing. :P