|Reviews for XSGCOM: Terra from the Deep|
| syed chapter 19 . 2/23
We are sure to have another epic space fleet showdown, this time over the planet of Da'kara. I think near every Gould capital ship would be there. THe Replicators have upgraded the system lords fleet, so all their ships would be able to be at the battle. Baal might have a few slower ships, but sonce the battle will be in his territory, it is likely even the slowest ship in his fleet can reach the battle. THe gould might lie to the bugs and leave a few ship out, but would they really risk the replicator's wrath. Anubis and Loki might be forced to send everything they have, as they cant allow for the bugs to get the weapon or their own plans go up in smoke. As much as the bugs want the weapon, they would see anubis and loki as the biggest threats, as they likely have the most advanced tech.
I am also betting the system lord ships are booby traped by the bugs, so Replicarter can deal with them at will. THe plans to destroy the fleet if necessary, but it would be cool if ithey could be captured, as it would let the jaffa have some power to sett themselves up. THey would keep the best ships, while renting/loaning/selling the lesser ships to the less advanced worlds in the alliance to help them develop themselves, in exchange for resources for the jaffa to build a proper civiliastion. I think the hatak will only last as long as it takes to design and build proper war ships, instead of something to feed the ego.
I always believed that device had to be powered by a ZPM, so take it to power atlantis, and no one can use it. Did they discover that energy eating creature in atlantis? THey could unleash it against anubis or simply build a similar cage to contain him. If captured, I hope he gets dumped into a black hole. THe monster could eat anubis, force him to use his powers and get stomped on by the ascended, or merge and become an even bigger monster.
Any chance the Unas will be invited to the alliance, help increase the non human races.
Will they atttempt to shut down the pegasus gates to use the wraith indiction devivce, or possibly create a smaller scale device to cause trouble with the wraith. I think some if not all hive have stargates on them, so better able to trap humans on their planet when culling, so getting that date to detonate is great.
| Kingdark chapter 19 . 2/2
It has taken me a FULL weekend to get through the remainder of the story before this one and then this story by itself and so far I'm really LOVING it. You are really talented and most of the things you use are based on the games and the show(s) itself. Not only that but you know the show(s) and the games well enough to think outside the box and take what you know, change x and know that it isn't enough changing to be unrealistic. (I hope that made sense)
Anyway, I'm really looking forward to further updates because this is one story I'm really looking forward to. Hopefully there will be a third story as well dealing with what will be the destiny I hope.
| neogoki chapter 12 . 2/1
Russell Sharp AKA Sharpy the X-Com-Man
the very definition of how humans were supposed to be
this is such sweet propaganda-material XD
| neogoki chapter 5 . 2/1
Sharp's subconcious is a scary place
| Hattu chapter 19 . 1/20
So any plans to continue thus?
| Hattu chapter 12 . 1/20
Hahahahaa Sharp, the paragon of humanity... IN your face Weir! ;)
| Fulgrim chapter 19 . 1/14
...what a ride! :D
This is a truly magnificent fanfic series, and I can't wait to see what you do with it next. Hope you update one day! :)
| Guest chapter 19 . 12/31/2013
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/30/2013
one thing i felt i should point out, from what i know the aa12 has very little recoil, not just as far as auto shotguns go, but just automatic gun in general. I admit, my knowledge of firearms isnt all that great, but i have seen several videos of aa12s being demonstrated, andin once case fired onehanded held away from the body, and even without the bracing it still stayed more or less on target, with littlerecoil. The videos could have been less than realistic i suppose, but w/e, thought it was worth a mention
| Steve79 chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
For those that have been following this story, while the author hasn't updated anywhere in several months, the first two portions of chapter twenty can be found on in the story discussion thread over on .com
For those that follow the author her or on the twisting the hellmouth site, you probably will not see a story update here until/unless the third portion of chapter twenty is put out.
| Transreal Clouden chapter 19 . 10/28/2013
I'm disappointed to find myself at the end of this story. I hope You'll choose to continue it at some point.
| Jonuts chapter 15 . 10/11/2013
I love the way they regard the Aschen. When giving them hyperdrives is only 'slightly' less drastic then writing off human civilization in the Milky way, you know they got a bad rep. I couldn't help but laugh at that.
| Jonuts chapter 8 . 10/10/2013
I would disagree about your assessment that kiloton range weapons couldn't effectively kill a wraith ship. Giant slabs of armor would certainly make such weapons useless against the outside, but that same armor works against it when it comes to an interior explosion. The internal pathways of the ship would do much to channel the explosive power and give it a greater effective range than bursting one on a planet would. I would put money that even if they can't score secondary explosions strong enough to wipe the ship out, you're still getting an effective kill due to internal damage.
I suppose that would lack the bling of a 1.2 gigaton bomb vaporizing the ship though.
| Jouaint chapter 19 . 8/12/2013
| salamangkero chapter 18 . 7/17/2013
this is the third time i've read your series. great story. hope you update sometime soon.
there are still the vanir, asurans and ori to incorporate to the story.
maybe a little bit of sg universe too.