Reviews for The First Breath
Guest chapter 7 . 4/17
Seriously in love with your story and losing sleep to stay up and read. Them talking on the phone to get to know one another is giving me all sorts of wonderful feels.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/17
These two are my OTP for this universe. The end. I like this idea a lot.
agoogoo chapter 17 . 4/25/2017
this fic is so much more than i expected. very nice! good job
jeoliverio chapter 19 . 1/1/2017
This story is good but sad at times too
Sassyvampmama chapter 19 . 4/20/2016
Loved it, thanks for sharing.
andrewpine chapter 19 . 3/14/2016
Loved it.
andrewpine chapter 16 . 3/14/2016
About time.
andrewpine chapter 13 . 3/14/2016
Once she finds out what Peter's problem is she will be so pissed at him.
andrewpine chapter 11 . 3/14/2016
Talk to him.
andrewpine chapter 10 . 3/14/2016
Curious about Jasper's past with Maria and what is the real truth.
andrewpine chapter 7 . 3/14/2016
Wonder how they will like living in D. ?
andrewpine chapter 6 . 3/14/2016
Misunderstandings are a many I wonder if's.
andrewpine chapter 5 . 3/14/2016
Was Jasper just a tension release,a distraction from all of the pain? it seems like role reversal normally it is the woman that gets the cold shoulder after something like Bella acting like this because she is not sure how he really feels about her or she just needed that and she is ready to move on?
Did he really hear what he thought he did as he left,was she sad to see him go or was she just crying because of her loss?
andrewpine chapter 3 . 3/14/2016
Hit too close to home.
AnaMarieWest chapter 7 . 4/12/2015
I've been looking for this for foreeeever! All I could remember was that they had sex during Chalrie's funeral and Pearl Jam lol. I have you to thank for introducing the into my life. Glad I found this again :).
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