Reviews for Complicated
silton chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
Well done. I love me an Emo Edward! Wouldn't mind him being my first and he can have my panties any time!
YazPistachio19 chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
I read the story before looking at the photos. It was really funny how excited I got as I was reading and I realized exactly which photo Number 3 had to be. Excellent! I can't wait for more...Will there be more?
ikinz chapter 1 . 1/4/2010

I like this. You must continue...

could you sneak in a painter/porn king while your at it? LOL

great job
patch138 chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
wow, that could really take off from there!

jennayg123 chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Such a good story! Are you going to continue it after the contest?
SubtlePen chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
i hate to say this, because i can hear all the kittens dying, but this begs to be expanded.

intense, confusing, intriguing...
shar76 chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
I like this one over the other one.. It just flows much better. the other on was being pushed out, it felt to me.. I hope you win
sweet2you chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
I like it!

I see a wonderful long story emerging from this. Please continue.
MasenCullen chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
You have piqued my interest w/ this delicious morsel. Mmhm. I am very Torn... hee hee hee... between the two OS's that you have graced me w/. I love them both. I want more. And the visual you based this off of... Jesus Christ... I-I-I... it's hot... like really fucking hot.

I'm curious as to why 'she' left again. One of the reasons this grabs a hold of me is because he's typically the one to leave... not her... I like that you have reversed their roles... making him question himself... question why she leaves... is it him or is it her... question who 'she' is. Nice. When she says, "It's complicated, Edward," I was like huh? Come again? How does she know his name, yet he does not know hers? ::smirks:: That's the million dollar question yes? His questions... her answers... I'm ready to devour more.
cheddah chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Very intriguing! I want more of this one! ;)

So good.

Jessypt chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
I seriously think it's amazing that you came up with this story. I would love to have an ounce of your creativity. ;)
addictedtotwilight79 chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Incredible. I'm not sure which picture you picked but I saw that one picture where Rob is reading Sex Driven People. I don't even know if that is the base of the contest. LOL.

Again, great job! Your amazing.

Decadent Anarchy chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Oh My :D This was fantastic! And great choice in pic :) Better you than me having to narrow it down to just one Rob pic, how on earth did you manage that ;)

I do it to myself all the time, read contest pieces and envitably I want them to continue... I feel like Oliver Twist was on to something when he said "Please Sir, I want some more"!

Is this a contest that we get to vote in for you?

Well done, loved it :)

Min xo
CorrinaTFF chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
I'm just as curious as Edward! How does she know?

Is she vamp?
mspacman1 chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
what is she?
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