|Reviews for The Art of Surveillance|
| LouBelle04 chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Really enjoyed this :)
| JTSplash chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
hehehe loved it. was waiting for gene to get his own back :D
| Jazzola chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
This is great! I love the article as well XD Thanks!
| Deweynumbers chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Concise, in character, Alex and Gene playing 'games' and great little touches such as 'bark of laughter' and 'out of their separate miseries'. So don't be too hard on yourself.
Any chance of a follow-up with the tables turned?
| HeidiT chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
I thought I'd already reviewed this.
Anyway, I think it's very, very good.
| Srebrna chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
Brilliant! :) I just had a laughing fit over this one.
I like Luigi, poor guy, always watching these two ;)
| theHuntgoeson chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Don't know why you didn't like it, I think it's great, especially the banter between them in the car, and you write Luigi so well - I love "Luigi wasn't sure whether to cross himself from the momentary fear he'd had that the man would launch a fist over the bar or the sheer surprise that the man in question was laughing.". Write more like this!
| sash queen of the jungle chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
well i loved it so the secret santa should have done also. thanks
| Bloodheart06 chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Aww i liked it : D
You going to carry on?
| Symphony In Blue chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Loved it! Their eternal flirting is hilarious. If only they'd gone as far as actually kiss, that would've been hot. But it was better this way, because the flirting and teasing was great!
| Winam chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Beautifully written, like your other stories. I like the subtlety of it all too.
| Malena Hunt chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
I really liked it, but it screams for a sequel. ;) Well done!
| Vicky1981 chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Great fic, some really funny lines!
| louella chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
I like it but I'd like it more if you'd write a second chapter - please?
Good to see you're writing again - I love your work.
| Emmylou chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Excellente! I can't believe you changed it so much based on what I said. I loved the changes you've made to to 'indian love poetry' scene - really made it sparkle!