|Reviews for Forever and Ever Babe|
| louisejtwin2 chapter 16 . 3/9
This story makes no sense at all
| DeJee chapter 19 . 10/14/2013
ok the plot is ok not good not bad.. your writing on the other hand is really bad you jump from one thing to the other no spell check apparently paragraphthe POV are not that good seriously get a beta or proof reader
| Sunne240 chapter 11 . 7/31/2013
I live in Mobile, AL... I am so excited that your Cullens live here too :)
| Guest chapter 13 . 5/10/2013
Ammmmm Vamps cant cry...impossible for vamps from the Twilight world to cry
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/10/2013
Ok...I kinda had tears in my eyes when Emmett borke down.
Bella seems to be like Rogue from XMen in this?
Newborns wouldn't be able to control themselves
| kikouma chapter 3 . 10/2/2012
You REALLY NEED A BETA
Wont * Want
Alfa * Alpha.. and more
| Monica chapter 19 . 5/15/2012
Wow! Great story
| aj chapter 4 . 2/6/2012
story is great just couldn't get past grammer
| Smayz chapter 3 . 7/8/2011
I really like the plot of Bella getting cancer after Edward leaves, but it's really confusing to read this. The dialogue is a bit unnatural and the paragraphs don't flow. A simple proofreading could get rid of the choppiness and grammar issues. Really good idea for a story though.
| xXxKARKATxXx chapter 19 . 6/13/2011
You always make me cry or go 'awwww' but thats why your on my favorites. Love the story.
| Grumbly Bear chapter 3 . 3/31/2011
. . . Wow, that is not how you get lung cancer, though genetic lung cancer is possible and extremely rare so they probably wouldn't have caught that, it IS still genetic.
| xxxLauraaxxx chapter 19 . 9/26/2010
heyy luv this story
plz write more soon
| bleach number 1 fan chapter 19 . 6/21/2010
Omg very very nice fic i love this pairing and i loved your story line :-) some of it almost made me cry lol i cant w8t to read more of your work in the future and good luck with it
| bitten2 chapter 11 . 6/20/2010
you have a really good story i think you should slow it down its going to fast and also please make the chapters longer. please update soon!
| brokenvoice chapter 12 . 6/1/2010
Okay so I can see you finished this story a couple months ago,but I'm going to review anyways. First off I like your idea ,the whole Bella gets cancer and realizes she loves Alice instead of on seriously you need to write better. Your paragraphs are to clustered and half the time I couldn't understand what the hell was going on.I'm not trying to be mean here,but if you want more reveiws and more hits on your story people need to actually be able to read you haven't already then please look for a Beta Reader. They help alot. All in all it was a good idea and the story was ok,but just work on it.