Reviews for Paper Reality
theredrobin chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Very pretty. I like the repetition of that end refrain.
UNDERLANDERfromtheOVERLAND chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
this is... beautiful! The flow was amazing, and I think it captured the sad hope that epitomizes the book.

Just a question, though: Are you a nerdfighter?
trench chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
love! Though it did get a bit repetitive at the end (I think you should've ended with "forever a paper girl", not "forever a paper town"), this is still amazing! And your pen name, I love Looking for Alaska!
glassangelrose chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
This is a beautiful poem, its sad, but well written and i think it does a good job of showing what Margo was thinking:)
reader300 chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
I think this is good! I don't know much about poetry (except haikus... :) and so I wouldn't be able to tell you anything to improve on...but that I really liked it :)
Maggetator chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
Hey, I think you accidentally uploaded this under Looking For Alaska, even though you wrote this for Paper Towns. Just thought you might want to know. But I DID read it. I love the part where you said "two hearts will never beat the same," something along those lines. I really liked that.
Most Definitely chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
I like this alot. It has flow.