Reviews for Every Other Life
JayRain chapter 1 . 7/24
Oh. Just... oh. I'm breaking up inside. This is so heartwrenchingly sad. You've captured the reality of politics so well, but also the pain of what that means for so many other people. The second person voice makes this immersive and even more emotional. The idea of what could have been is always emotional, but the way you've presented it here is all the more intense. Very, very well done.
8ron chapter 1 . 2/24
I didn't ask for these feels! Jeeezz. That was so, SO good and SO sad! How dare you? With great power comes great responsibility my friend. Now excuse me while I read this a second time and try to keep from crying.
Kuromei Aibyouka chapter 1 . 1/19
This is why I always become Alistair's queen. I can't lose him; not to her, not to anyone. It hurts too much.
AllThingWeird35 chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
Son of a bitch, I'm crying like a wuss. Nooooooo
FeminineBrain chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
This was just so beautiful. I had a sudden image of the Warden in Amaranthine raising the child while still being a bad ass Commanders. In comes Alistair visiting. She's hiding the kid but Alistair still catches a glance and knows the kid is his. I keep imagining the confrontation.
scipunx chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
Nopenopenope, I cannot handle this. This is why I make Alistair remain as unhardened and a Grey Warden because to me, that's the happiest outcome (screw Ferelden, Anora is more than capable as a ruler).

This was a beautiful little oneshot that pretty much tore my heart out which is a good thing, haha!
spazhime chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
O.O chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
Oh my god...
That's so sad. Beautiful, but so very poignant
Rekkia-chan chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
Aw man, I'm crying. I know you wrote this forever ago but it's brilliant and I just had to tell you that! Painful, but brilliant. Well done.
Pumpernickel chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
I'm seriously tearing up. It takes a special kind of author to make second person work well, and you totally nailed it. Truly amazing work.
Maleficarum chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
I cry. Like, literally, this is flipping sad. How Alistair really changed from a gentle, funny Warden to a whole new person...a harsh king. And how the F!Warden is his mistress for a time, and how everything is different. Brings tears to my eyes.
Especially since freaking Anora has to be pregnant. Ugh, I hate her.
But then there's Ali-boo-bear, being all good and kind and standing by her. No!
Tis a lovely piece of work.
Cemosh chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
That was agonisingly beautiful, at the end of it the tragedy of it all just hits you. And i think the ambiguity of the Warden adds to it; you can imagine her as you wish, whether it be your own PC or not. Thank you for this gorgeous piece of writing, it is utterly fantastic.
oppasyeobo chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
The feels, the feels... I hate you so much!

Thank you! :'(
Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
Very beautiful, very not fluffy, just awesome ..

naomis8329 chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
How sad. She should tell him, tell him he was wrong that they could have had it all.. and now she will do it without him.

I'm so sad for both of them. Time is a healer but will that be enough?

Thank you for sharing

Naomi xxx
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