interesting storyline

LOVED THIS SO MUCH! I will read it again next year. I’m going to mourn it for a bit.

She really is delusional. He’s gonna go home and get the letter and know that what she said to him was a LIE! She did all of that for him, BECAUSE she loved him beyond words! AAAAAHHHHH!

I’m more worried about what Marcus is up to. I think he’s working with James and Jake and I really don’t like it.

Yes, I caught the POV Change during the first sentence of the new POV. Great job transitioning. Loving this story. Can’t wait for more.

Excellent story. I'm hooked

I know you might not see this but I understand a little bit of the pain you said about sudden infant syndrome as I lost my sister to it when we were 7 months old

Thank you for this great story!

Bella is just so stupid! Then again so is Edward. He was being blackmailed out of millions of dollars. that is a lengthy jail sentence, yet they staid quiet out of embarrassment? Well the Tanya pictures were let out anyway.

As for Bella, she should have been knocked around even more, for stupidly wanting to die in Edward's place.

Loved the story! Excellent job!

Beautiful story.
Definitely needed more than one tissue.

She deserves all the unhappiness she gets. Over dramatic Whining idiot. I

Your Bella is an over dramatic ass. You would have done good to have her killed off !

I have read hundreds of fanfics and this is the first one where I hope Bella dies. Shes so over dramatic.

Wow! This story was absolutely amazing! It took me on a roller coaster of emotions! I was anxious and upset when Bella and Edward were, I was happy and content when they were and I was worried when all of their friends were! It was so fabulously written and I loved every minute I sat down to read it, every chapter you posted and every sentence you wrote! I am going to go read your other stories because I feel you are a fantastic writer and I can't wait to read more from you!