Bella is just so stupid! Then again so is Edward. He was being blackmailed out of millions of dollars. that is a lengthy jail sentence, yet they staid quiet out of embarrassment? Well the Tanya pictures were let out anyway.

As for Bella, she should have been knocked around even more, for stupidly wanting to die in Edward's place.

Loved the story! Excellent job!

Beautiful story.
Definitely needed more than one tissue.

She deserves all the unhappiness she gets. Over dramatic Whining idiot. I

Your Bella is an over dramatic ass. You would have done good to have her killed off !

I have read hundreds of fanfics and this is the first one where I hope Bella dies. Shes so over dramatic.

Wow! This story was absolutely amazing! It took me on a roller coaster of emotions! I was anxious and upset when Bella and Edward were, I was happy and content when they were and I was worried when all of their friends were! It was so fabulously written and I loved every minute I sat down to read it, every chapter you posted and every sentence you wrote! I am going to go read your other stories because I feel you are a fantastic writer and I can't wait to read more from you!

This chapter had me in tears. I had a feeling Marcus had something to do with it all along. You are an amazing author. Any author who can bring a physical reaction out of a reader whether it be years of sadness, joy or laughter is an amazing person. Thank you

Loved it :)

You're a good writer but this seems to teeny bobber. Miley Cyrus...dramatic ex...making out with someone you done really know. I thought these people were adults.

Yay wanted to say that I thoroughly enjoyed this story... Can't believe it's your first fanfic!

I read a lot of FanFic...a lot! There are few stories that truly touch my heart, and this is one of them. I laughed, and cried a lot, but never lost hope in these two. Their story was unique, they were both broken in different ways, but their love healed each of them, and together, they were whole.

Thank you for this story! I will go read your others, but this one was really special!

xoxoSus

My head is spinning, and I'm crying, so I don't know WTF is going on here! I thought he was going to Bella?

This is so, so sad...I, like Bella, have lost hope, although I'm sure you'll prove me wrong. I still don't get why she did this! Why she thinks she is saving him, by wounding him more than anyone could? I don't totally understand...she really, really, really needs help...mental health-wise!

I'll be glad when all this gets solved...it's hurting my heart, too!

Oh, FUCK!