Reviews for The Harem War
stacygrrl2002 chapter 21 . 3/23
more and more wheels within plots.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 20 . 3/23
well more and more... guess the queen ought to be about ready to step I and dispose of Fudge, and send in the counter-terrorist teams for voldemort and maybe Dumbledore and the bad guys. I feel a new doctor here at home with a new clinic, a new school to put Hogwarts out of business or in her place, and more.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 19 . 3/22
awesome
stacygrrl2002 chapter 18 . 3/22
interesting
stacygrrl2002 chapter 17 . 3/22
Once he gets to 20, its gonna take all day just to make the rounds. Good thing he doesn't needa paying job
stacygrrl2002 chapter 16 . 3/22
excellent scripting. Shame its the Greenglass girls and they get screwed this way, but it may be the best deal they get in the long run. But to not have a chance for a wife bond...tough on them. At least Harry doesn't seem too bad so far
stacygrrl2002 chapter 15 . 3/22
good scripting, nice plot work.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 14 . 3/22
interesting Had a passing thought MGM was Minerva, but was still a surprise. At least these guys had good taste so far. Hell to get summoned blindly like that, glad things seemed to workout for them.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 13 . 3/22
great.

I knew that rune was heavily involved someway. Shame it activating did not put Tommy down at the same time. He probably is aware of it, and will take extra precautions now.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 12 . 3/22
nice. A bit surprised that Remus and Tonks can pop in without Harry being aware of it. They are cleared through the wards, but you would think some notice of arrival being made.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 10 . 3/22
whew! eye openingthought something like this was coming. Harry's gonna be one busy little puppy. sick bunch of sob's running things for their benefit.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 8 . 3/22
kewl. This was worse than I expected, but should have based on the intro info. wheels within wheels, within more wheels, and looks like Harry is gonna toss more than one stone into them to bring it to a screeching halt. I think he needs to keep his extra eyes open, as even his saviors may have more plans to watch out for. Where's a Machiavelli when you need one.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 7 . 3/22
nice, very nice. wheels within wheels. get 'em Harry.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 6 . 3/22
lets see, Harry, diadem, cup, locket, snake, Tom, ring...all accounted for. That leaves Tom for Harry (or anyone) to take care of.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 4 . 3/22
very nice. this is a whole different Order than used to. Seems to be a subset working within, or letting Dumbles run a subset and he is not involved in the Big Picture as he thinks.
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