Hello! I'm reading this in 2024 as I felt very nostalgic to the twilight era (aka the hoa hoa hoa season) and many recommended this to me
And I must say, this is a fanfic I never knew I needed!
It's like the perfect twilight we never got
It still preserved the twilight essence alright, but I loved how both characters are now standing on equal footing which allowed them to communicate more smoothly, and for a healthier relationship to actually develop; I obviously loved every bit of it!
Thank you author for this amazing fanfic!

i know i am 10 years late but the hindi version of fate here करना(pronounced as karna) actually translates to 'to do' and fate actually translates to भाग्य (pronounced as bhagya)
believe me i would know as i am indian and speak hindi daily.

Burqa yuck

Great story. I love this concept. I hope you eventually get to writing a sequal or two. i love all the fluffy potential this has.

oh screw Mike Newton, who cares what that little pip squeak thinks?

κάνω, करना and делать don’t translate to “fate”, but to “to do”. I noticed it right away because I know Russian, but it’s the same with Greek and Hindi.

I lost all respect for the story and writer when you recreated that stupid dumbass scene between Bella and Charlie. It was fucking stupid in canon, it’s even more retarded to copy it when it’s even more fucking pointless. I’m out.

loved every word of this! thank you!

I know this was complete a good while ago. But I just found it . Such a lovely twist on the cannon. I love that Bella saved herself. Thank you for such an enjoyable story!

I just finished the first chapter but BEFORE I EVEN START the rest, I can just tell how good this is going to be already and I am so looking forward to fixating on this until I finish the whole fanfic (which I posit will not take long considering how immersive and impressive your writing has been in just the first chapter).

Interstate twist on canon
I’m hoping Bella’s shield will explode.
And there is a lighter in her purse.
Thanks

Oh time to get the wolves invloved ?

I want to say billy is an ass
But I understand where he is coming from
Although he should have wanted to get Jake out of there as soon as Bella clued him in.
The was irresponsible
Phew no harm done

So he’ll either continue to be Bella’s friend or he’ll ditch her.
At least he won’t be pining after her lol
Thanks

Thank you

I hope this hardens her resolve
Thanks