|Reviews for Scheme Of Fate|
| Vwchick chapter 22 . 1/16
This is such a Wonderful idea for an amazing twist in Twilight! I've never rad anything like it before, :-) I think you are an amazing writer, I know this has been completed for a few years now but I'm going I go to your page to see what else you have done :/) definitely going on my favorites page! Thanks so much!
| Red Eyed Newborn chapter 12 . 12/22/2013
I don't know why but I find this chapter very provoking. I know that this is fictional but I can't help connect it to civil rights issues that we have faced so much in our history (and continue to do so). Are vampires instantly evil? What I remember from the book, the pack said Vampires were evil because they need blood to exist but what about humans? We're worse aren't we than? We CHOOSE to eat other animals (because at the end of the day we are animals ourselves. More intelligent maybe but still animals) for our nutrients when soy and other protein products could sustain us. I guess it goes down to if you believe animals have a soul like us. What about the werewolves? They could lose it and kill/harm someone (ex. Sam Ulley). The Vampires didn't choose this fate, it was handed to them by unfair fate. In the end they still love, feel, and hurt. No matter the super strength, speed or what not. Being human doesn't make us instantly good. We choose to be good (to do good). I just thought Sam's high and mighty tone was just compassionate. I know it is necessary to protect and be vigilant but they way he just ASSUMED the worst in Bella made me want to slap him. I mean they are fighting every second and don't need his high and mighty tone. It would be like a human instantly thinking the pack was evil because they changed to huge canines that could kill you. Just because one has the ability to do something it doesn't mean that ability makes them who they are. Jesus, I'm fighting for rights of fictional characters. It's been a long night.
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 20 . 11/29/2013
Bad timinng, Horrible proposal, even worse reply. I have no Idea if you were really trying to write a romance or some really badly directed awkward moments.
Its all over this fanfic.
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 16 . 11/29/2013
So stupid. This is soooo stupid. Why do you let B.S drag on and on and on?. James is an enenmy and is nevvvverrr going to be a friend. END IT!.
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 14 . 11/29/2013
Oh lord. you are really stretching out this non-mystery of Bella being unsure of what Edward really feels and vice versa.
| Bella Katelyn chapter 22 . 11/16/2013
OMG you need to write the second pwrt I need more
| campyrs chapter 22 . 11/9/2013
This was such a good story. It's too bad you didn't continue the story with a sequel dealing with Victoria. Thank you for sharing your talent.
| RubysQuill chapter 22 . 11/6/2013
I hope you someday you find that you want to continue this alternate universe. This is far and away one of the best out there. Thank you for sharing.
| dbpbatm chapter 22 . 10/18/2013
Fun twist on cannon. Thank you for sharing this.
| nicole1962 chapter 22 . 9/14/2013
| shiroosh345 chapter 3 . 8/19/2013
i love this story!
| shiroosh345 chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
there's just one word to be said:
| BridieM chapter 22 . 8/12/2013
That is a wonderful story. Surprised you haven't written another story or two. You have a talent. I hope writing this brought, and continues to bring you pleasure. Thanks for sharing. :)
| BridieM chapter 16 . 8/12/2013
Ah. I suspected, but you've worked it all. :)
| BridieM chapter 14 . 8/12/2013
My husband did the same to me and it had the same effect. :o. Really good chapter. ;)