Reviews for Scheme Of Fate
Montara chapter 21 . 12/20/2015
She accepted the ring! And his conditions of courting...that's kind of unfair since she's a modern woman...but if she's ok...not that most modern women would accept him setting the pace like that, giving her only small kisses whenever HE wants...
Montara chapter 20 . 12/20/2015
Engaged :)
Montara chapter 19 . 12/20/2015
They forgot Victoria is still out there somewhere...
Montara chapter 18 . 12/20/2015
How would James have known if she were to tell where she was going?! She should have told them!
Montara chapter 17 . 12/20/2015
It is so sad each time I read a story where Bella has to hurt Charlie in order to protect him :( But she did protect him..
Montara chapter 16 . 12/20/2015
James and Victoria abandoned Laurent just like that! Maybe in your story he'll stay with Irina and be a good guy.

Can't believe they're hunting Charlie now!
Montara chapter 15 . 12/20/2015
Jake is transforming. Hope he'll still want to be friends with Bella. It will hurt her if not.
Montara chapter 14 . 12/20/2015
He said he loves her :D
Montara chapter 13 . 12/20/2015
Nice talk.
Montara chapter 12 . 12/20/2015
It went better than I thought things will go. They were civil with each other. But they were a lot more than I expected. Still, it went well.
Montara chapter 11 . 12/20/2015
Oh, no. Billy found out! And Jake is ok but he was in contact with a vampire and that means he'll transform soon. Hope things will be alright at the meeting.
Montara chapter 10 . 12/20/2015
Wow! She almost killed Mike! Rose in a way is right to be fearful of what Bella can do. But Bella is so strong that I don't think it's the case. Anyways, the Cullens are too vigilent for something bad to happen. Their cover is save.

They are a couple already! :) I kind of understand it because they are not humans anymore. Even with humans it happens to know it's fate. Glad he's giving her the time she needs to get used to the idea :)
Montara chapter 9 . 12/20/2015
Alice knowing from before happening that she'll suffer through her transformation should have made Bella very mad.

Who is she to play with Bella's life like that?!

If Alice thought she'll be important for her family, she should have stopped those vampires and give Bella the choice to change. In a way Alice is guilty of Bella's death.

And still, Bella is hanging out with them...I'd refuse to be around Alice for a while.
Montara chapter 8 . 12/20/2015
So glad she keeps him at a distance even now that he kind of confessed having feelings for her. She's right, he acted so bad in the beginning that it's weird how soon he's hitting on her.
Montara chapter 7 . 12/20/2015
Glad she's reserved when it comes to Edward and his family. Well, she's attracted to Edward too and that makes her even more reserved :)

Doesn't she know how beautiful she became after transforming?! Alice should tell her because she has an inferiority complex when thinking of Edward's handsomeness.
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