Reviews for Scheme Of Fate
Debbie Hicks chapter 23 . 3/11/2018
Kaylee's planetary power
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lizyeh2000 chapter 23 . 2/11/2018
Loved your story , now favourited!
Guest chapter 8 . 12/28/2017
must bella always have low self esteem? Shes so fucking pathetic.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2017
He got her a new bed, computer, AND painted her fucking room and all she says is "ya blue is fine" ? What an ungrateful CUNT!
VryUnique chapter 22 . 7/27/2017
I do think Charlie is a bit unreasonable. Bella is at an age when girls date and Edward hasn't done anything to earn Charlie's disdain. To treat him poorly just for dating his daughter is just ridiculous.
Great story! Thanks for sharing it.
I wish there had been more plot at school. I'm sorry we don't get to see the reactions of the students on the appearance Bella's ring.
VryUnique chapter 21 . 7/27/2017
Glad Jacob is somewhat ok with Bella. Was he jealous when Edward pulled her close? Would have loved for Edward to reveal what he was thinking through that talk.
VryUnique chapter 20 . 7/27/2017
Seems nobody is even thinking of Victoria, the person whose mate they killed.
VryUnique chapter 19 . 7/27/2017
Awwww... Bella needed a few more minutes. I would have loved to witness James realizing he had lost and was going to die.
VryUnique chapter 17 . 7/27/2017
Alsways hated how Charlie was hurt by Bella running in stories.
VryUnique chapter 16 . 7/27/2017
They should call the wolves.
VryUnique chapter 15 . 7/27/2017
Can't believe Edward would mention leaving when they're both vampires. Didn't realize you could leave your MATE to find someone else. Seemed a pretty stupid thing to say.
I think Bella should have at least waited a night before Edward came over.
VryUnique chapter 14 . 7/26/2017
VryUnique chapter 13 . 7/26/2017
Would still like to know what Rosalie's problem is exactly. I'm thinking it's that Bella is a newborn and she doesn't like the family being responsible for her but I would think Bella has proved herself by now. She has to see how happy Edward is so I think she is just selfish. I hate how every makes concessions for her.
VryUnique chapter 12 . 7/26/2017
I hate how they act like they're in charge and could take out the Cullens if they wanted. I would love to read a story where they're put in there place, there are so few.
VryUnique chapter 11 . 7/26/2017
I hate how the wolves try to dictate to the Cullens in stories like they could wipe them out if they want to. I hope Bella doesn't let them step all over her. I'm sure there are probably at least three wolves by now.
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