|Reviews for The Art of the Kiss|
| onewritergirl93 chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
AHH! This is too cute! I love it!
| spenc.7199 chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
| Katrina chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
I like sweet things and this hit the spot! Very fluffy and in a good way.
| TheBonesGirl33 chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
| Jisbonaddict chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Just PERFECT ! If something happens it would be this ! I could really figured out this scene ! Interactions are really in the show spirit and cho was the perfect one for this situation ! Best Jisbon fanfiction ever !
| crimeshowlover chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
cute, sweet and fluffy!
| L007 chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
| S.R Devaste chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
| Aeidhryn chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
only constructive criticism I have is
"Hey watch your language."
"Hey, watch your language."
That's all I got.
Though I think that some of your fics have too much unexplained UST (which is more Tony/Ziva if I may use a little NCIS example), this was less UST and but still UST. Um. I guess I'm not making sense.
A lot of your fics are wish-fulfillment, but I can't tell if you acknowledge this or if you think this is the status quo. This is definitely not the status quo. I can't tell.
Not that I don't enjoy myself, but I'm curious/confused.
| boidwriter chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
OMGoodness this was hilarious, and cute, and I don't even ship these two but I totally could after reading your fics.
This had me smiling uncontrollably, because I could totally picture that kind of interaction if a kiss was going to happen between them.
And Cho...he's one of my favourites on the show. It's his complete expressionless deadpan when he says almost everything that makes me howl. For some reason, it's totally fitting that he's the one that walks in on them.
| Lothlorien Aeterna chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
| April chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
What a nice story(:
| ScientificAnomaly chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
Can I just say, BEST Jello fic, ever written.
| melsbells91 chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
Very sweet and fluffy and adorable and wonderful! LOVED it, great job!
| CSIMNCISMentalistCastleBones chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
this story should definetly have more chapters! i really hope u consider it