Reviews for The Trouble with Francis
bridgeportfox chapter 14 . 3/18/2010
I really enjoyed your story. Francis is a favorite of mine, too, and it was fun read a story about him. Writing it from Dulcey's point of view was a good idea. Another woman would be more likely to see through Samantha than the men. I hope you do more Cimarron Strip stories.
Ross7 chapter 14 . 2/2/2010
Ah...lovely ending. :)

:) Ross7
Ross7 chapter 13 . 1/31/2010
I see you are sticking with telling your story strictly from Dulcey's perspective. You may want someone to explain to the reader how Jim and Mac' got rescued, as their rescue appears to be your story's 'climax'. Perhaps Francis could let her know when he meets up with her in the barn?

You write Dulcey very true to character. :)

Thanks for the update!

Ross7 chapter 12 . 1/27/2010
Wow! Lots of excitement in that chapter!

Dulcey was very brave, and it was nice to see

Samantha is finally out of that basement,

or root cellar, or whatever.

I'm thinking Samantha's brother will want to take her back home with him.

Ross7 chapter 11 . 1/24/2010
Hm...the plot takes another intriguing twist.

Thanks for the update!

Can't wait to see what the rescuers NOW

have in store for the bad dudes. :D

Ross7 chapter 9 . 1/17/2010
Great stuff!

Don't know why, but fanfic dot net didn't send me

any story alerts for the last couple of chapters.

Maybe if I re-subscribe? LOL

Hope real life allows you to update soon!

The suspense is killing me! :D

:) Ross7
Ross7 chapter 7 . 1/12/2010
Another wonderful chapter!

Really well-written! :)

Thanks for the rapid updates!

:) Ross7
Ross7 chapter 6 . 1/11/2010
Oh! Wonderful chapter!

I hope Samantha leaves 'the dark side'. :)

Ross7 chapter 5 . 1/8/2010
Sure hope Dulcey can open the others' eyes...while there's still time to save Jim!

:) Ross7
Ross7 chapter 4 . 1/7/2010

The plot thickens!

You've created such an evil villain and villainess. 0

Poor Francis...poor Jim.

I can't wait to read more! *hint hint hint* ;)

Ross7 chapter 3 . 1/7/2010
Can't wait to see who's watching Dulcey. ;)

Thanks for the update. :)

:) Ross7
Ross7 chapter 2 . 1/5/2010
Great beginning!

Can't wait to read more of your story!

Thanks for sharing, Sur-merGirl1963,

and welcome to the Cimarron Strip section of

fanfiction dot net. :D