Reviews for Wonder World
WolfReaper75 chapter 2 . 4/12/2014
I like the plot of your story, but it gets confusing as I read on. Work on your grammar and punctuation. It'll make more sense if you do so.
domi chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
you have to keep on writting this story.

I need to know what happens next / please update soon!
Pineapple Joonmyun chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
it's pretty good but there is jst one thing i like, that is that you have like these for girls, it's hard to keep a track on who is who and who end up with who and stuff but for the rest a bit of grammar mistakes but that can be fixed keep up the good work! ;3
RedDressDhole chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
This is really good so far, Write more !

And who do all the girls like pertain to? Like in this world, is Danni you?