Reviews for Moving Forward
CrazyDarkness15 chapter 25 . 8/29/2013
That was so sweet :) I loved this chapter! Keep up the good work.
CrazyDarkness15 chapter 24 . 8/20/2013
Update? I like this story alot
Mark from NJ chapter 24 . 4/16/2013
CiaraMorgan: Loved the Unit TV show and just found this site. Read your story and enjoyed it immensely. Never liked the Tiffy character, glad you off-ed her. But by somewhere around chapter 20 or so when the cute and talented Liz turned into a super secret agent, it was really too much to stomach. How does a 24-year-old have ALL those experiecnes and be battle-hardened enough to go in and seamlessly become part of the team? Not really beleivable. I really enjoyed the Unt when the team went on missions. But all the wife-back-on-base drama was nothing but a distraction. I know that the writers/producers were trying to woo a female demographic with that stuff, instead of just the male 18-39 demo. But it ruined it a little for me. That said, your story would have fit in well with one of their episodes. Bottom line though, I enjoy the story. good job.
Kenikia67 chapter 7 . 9/17/2012
I'm loving this story. don't tiffy either
another guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
I'm glad you updated so soon. Normally I don't write reviews, but this was too good not to. I hope you update soon
ChrisMaryaddict98 chapter 24 . 8/28/2012
Another entertaining chapter, even though I have My Girl running through my brain. LOL oh well it was worth it
ChrisMaryaddict98 chapter 23 . 8/19/2012
Hi! Sorry I haven't reviewed all month. Time got away from me. Oh my God I'm chomping at the bit so hard right not to see what happens when Liz sees Mac. But I love your Mikhail character and how good he is to Liz. Not to sound corny but he has a lot of depth and would love to see him in another story. Perhaps a sequel -hint hint-. Sorry I'm getting ahead of everything and I again look forward to more chapters
guest chapter 22 . 8/13/2012
Wow I just finished your story and I'm impressed. Your character Liz has many layers and must be fun to write about. I love how she can handle herself in a situation and cannot wait to see what happens when Mack sees this side of her. Please update soon.
cinefila chapter 21 . 8/9/2012
I like it very much so please continue as soon as you can please! :):):)
another guest chapter 21 . 8/2/2012
This is a great and different story. I'm glad to see Ryan in a different light and I can completely relate to Liz and how she interacts with people. She's a good character to pair up with Mack. Thanks for sharing and I hope you update soon
crazymary chapter 21 . 8/2/2012
Wow this is very good! Thank you for sharing and please keep updating, I'm anxious to find out what happens
ChrisMaryaddict98 chapter 21 . 7/30/2012
LOL Liz is such a minx with Hector. Wow what a great twist, can't wait for Mack's reaction when he sees her
ChrisMaryaddict98 chapter 20 . 7/29/2012
Ooh Christmas in July for me and thanks for updating so soon. My sanity appriciates it ;). Keep it up, I can't wake to find up what happens next. I have a couple senerios going through my head
ChrisMaryaddict98 chapter 16 . 7/28/2012
Oh thank you for updating. I loved these chapters! Believe me when I say I'm picky about stories and I think this on is one of my favorites. I know you just put up 3 chapters, but I'm excited to read more! Please update again soon! Love the Liz character!
Guest chapter 13 . 7/16/2012
Great story i really like to know more so please another chapter soon pleaaaaaseeeee!
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