Reviews for The Hostile Takeover Job |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. The health food store reminds of one I would go to when I was a child. |
![]() ![]() Love the story keep it going please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh, nice development here. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LMAO, you should have a little sub-story all about the woodworms and thier adventures. Loved it! Lisette |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great storycan't wait to se what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad you decided to continue this story. I'm sorry to hear about the real-life version. The characters are awesome, and the plot seems well thought out. |
![]() ![]() Hallo da draußen schöne Story...gibts noch mehr davon? ich würde gern wissen, wie es ausgeht...bitte |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Thank you for updating |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this. I wish you would finish |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! please let this be an huge Eliot whump fic. pretty please... thanks! good luck :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh! A cliffhanger again! :) This story is a lot of fun! I'm really enjoying it. I love Eliot (and Parker! And Hardison... and, well, just everyone) and your original character is charming and down-to-earth (very refreshing!) Thanks for updating this! I can't wait to read more. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh No Annie! I knew that guy was going be no good. Sophie and her HEEL? Poor PArker! Will they get to her in time? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow ... these bad guys are serious. And they're totally about to get a serious beatin' as soon as Eliot gets his hands on them. With any luck, they won't see what hit them. |