Reviews for The Hostile Takeover Job
BookWorm37 chapter 5 . 1/16/2010
... Wow. This story is pretty good so far. I like it. Annie seems like a great victim for them to help.
jasadin chapter 4 . 1/15/2010
oh no oh no!
jasadin chapter 3 . 1/15/2010
lol. i loved elliot playing bingo!
MusicMagicMurder chapter 4 . 1/12/2010
Omg, is Parker ok? And maybe I'm a little paraniod but that guy seemed weird to me.
Account Killer Deactivated chapter 4 . 1/11/2010
Don't tell me something happened to Parker?

Don't tell me that something is going to happen to Annie while Eliot went to see what's up?

What's up with the guy who left his wallet, was that just filler stuff or did it have something to do with the whole plot line?
MusicMagicMurder chapter 3 . 1/11/2010
bettine chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Going great so far, I like the story premise you came up with. Very original for the setting and involving the team. Keep going I wanna know what happens. If you need a beta I'd be willing to help. Just drop a message if you want,
Account Killer Deactivated chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
More Please?

I take it Eliot has a little interest in out Annie gurl?

I'd like the rest please with non posioned honey on top!
jerseybones chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
The plot is starting out on a fantastic premise. I'm loving the small town, A-Team feel, and of course, having Eliot's protective streak at the heart of it. You also made Annie into a very real character and I can clearly picture and feel for her.

There were a few grammar and punctuation mistakes that were a bit distracting, but overall I can't wait for the next chapter.
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