Reviews for TFA Shattered Glass
russianwinter013 chapter 2 . 3/22
It would be nice if the story wasn't in bold, and if you bothered to start a new paragraph each time someone spoke. You haven't been taught basic grammar, I assume? Not being rude; it's just what it looks like...
Guest chapter 8 . 3/12
An other star wars reference!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
In this sequal sentinel is good write a sg beast wars story please but a complain is a lot of character personality a are unmirrord wreckage gold bug mixmaster and scrapper should hate oil and be evil why in the canon they were never truly bad gold bug is primes soundwave
Guest chapter 19 . 5/11/2014
Wait I was scrolling threw the chapter and goldbug was alive
Guest chapter 8 . 5/11/2014
blast me for a fool you quoted the original sg starscream
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
the next story should feature rodimus the dinobots springer the aerial bots dinobots blurr andmain villain ultra magnus and kup along with galvatron the predacons the sweeps including the tripedicas council in the sequal
Guest chapter 7 . 4/21/2014
Did elita and optimus date and the next one you should just get ideas not from the show
Guest chapter 21 . 4/18/2014
In the sequal optimus should escape with his sucsesor rodimus and the the autobots would got o vea
Guest chapter 19 . 4/18/2014
You quated beast wars alot with the crosshaor and scoops trial and the base destroyed and waspinator
Guest chapter 14 . 4/18/2014
Megatron did not seem to be good this chapter
Guest chapter 11 . 4/18/2014
Ooh circuit breakerXgoldbug
Benthino chapter 6 . 2/5/2014
AND THE UNIVERSE WILL REJOICE! ALL HAIL HIS GRAND AND GLORIOUS RETURN!
TFALokiwriter chapter 19 . 7/29/2013
Hahahaha on the hitting thing between the constructicons! XDD. Priceless! Pretty good work :)
TFALokiwriter chapter 18 . 7/29/2013
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :( Poor Sari...awww...That's...just..sooo..sad. :( That's nicely done, I hardly cry for any character, but this makes me sad, I think you dou did a absolutely splendid job putting forth such effort! :) Man, I feel bad for Sari :'(
TFALokiwriter chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
Wooohoo, neat story! :D
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